same goes for me. thanks alot!
quite an unusual twist in the story there, not really expected, but i think it's because of that very twist that I kept reading out of curiosity even after blowing. Great work!
Wow this is till getting attention?
Looking back at it the end feels rushed, should be longer I guess
I must say it started out good and is well written but it really brought me down seeing these guys take advantage of a trusting female like this the girls mother really fucked her up and those two guys are losers it makes me angry because I know people who have suffered at the hands of jerks who think bdsm means they can brutalize people while getting all the pleasure I hope this is fiction because it was real that nice girl is probably dead or dying by now but I digress you are a good writer and it was a well written story although to any readers please don't take the action perpetrated in the story as real bdsm if you ant the proper low down on such lifestyles ask Blackwinter or Marlene and if the author of this tale is offended by my opinion I deeply apolagize my words are ment as feedback and not an insult you are a good writer but your story may offend those who live a bdsm lifestyle or even give those who want to try it the wrong impression of what a masters responsibilities are to the submissives thank you for your story it really moved me
even if you outclass me in every way and strike me down repeatedly I will always rise from the ashes
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Great story. I really liked the way the story progressed. Please share more.
a long story but very worth the read sexy from begining to end
It started off very well but the latter half declined as I read it...
I am new in this forum,and to much excited to read the story.
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