ShadowsRage
05-29-2007, 05:01 PM
A poem I wrote a few months ago. Was looking for some feedback, tell me what you think.
An angels voice from angels lips
Has stricken me as I slowly slip
Into sleep and into dreams
And slowly it would come to seem
As though that angel watches me
And yet her face I cannot see
Each night she sings her lullaby
But with the morn she says goodbye
On that night her face shown clear
And in my heart I hold it dear
Tonight I finally saw her face
And in my heart I've filled that space
With all those feelings I hold for her
So now my sight no longer blurs
That face I see so clearly now
So obvious that I don't see how
I could not see this long before
And now I wait for what's in store
I've finally seen her face, it's true
My angel is... well... it's you
An angels voice from angels lips
Has stricken me as I slowly slip
Into sleep and into dreams
And slowly it would come to seem
As though that angel watches me
And yet her face I cannot see
Each night she sings her lullaby
But with the morn she says goodbye
On that night her face shown clear
And in my heart I hold it dear
Tonight I finally saw her face
And in my heart I've filled that space
With all those feelings I hold for her
So now my sight no longer blurs
That face I see so clearly now
So obvious that I don't see how
I could not see this long before
And now I wait for what's in store
I've finally seen her face, it's true
My angel is... well... it's you