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freedom37803
08-03-2007, 03:56 PM
Not a good as Thedeep or Rose but here ya go...


In the night


Wrapped in silence,
We sleep in a loving embrace.
In the darkness your hands creep,
Over my body.

I can feel the hunger in your hands.
Gripping my breast through my shirt.
A moan escapes my lips,
Surprise awakening me.

My body moves in response,
As your hands find their way,
Under my shirt,
Fondling my hard nipples.

I begin to writhe,
As you awake my passions.
My moans grow,
Feeling your hands move lower.

Your hand brushes my thigh,
My heart jumps with excitement.
I feel you moving slowly,
Yet with confidence.

You know what you want.
I let out a cry of pleasure,
As your fingers,
Slid into my dripping pussy.

Moving with purpose,
Causing my body to writhe,
Loud moans as you move,
Deep inside of me.

As I moan,
You seem to work harder,
Then I feel it,
As it nears.

You move your hand faster,
Bringing me to climax.
My back arches as I release.
Breathing ragged.

You wrap your arms around me,
Replacing the passion,
With a deep sweet kiss.
Holding me close.

Letting the night,
Surround us in silence once again.
Broken only by sighs of contentment,
As dreams sweep us away once again.

badlybent
08-24-2007, 11:47 AM
Congratulations Freedom.

freedom37803
08-24-2007, 10:15 PM
Wow....I'm honestly shocked but pleasently so....thanks to all who voted

wizardwriter
08-25-2007, 10:23 AM
congrats hot stuff-
suppose every time I do something silly in RP I'll hear about it-
But that's okay I can hang for a week, maybe to the end of the month-
Wizard

Suthernlady
08-25-2007, 10:54 AM
YAY! Freedom...dont be shocked! I loved your poem! Congrats sexy lady!

Calisc6070
08-26-2007, 02:28 AM
Thats an amazing poem :) You deserve the credit

freedom37803
08-26-2007, 02:39 PM
Kinda wish Thedeep had won now....but...he'd of been proud of me...:)

Thanks guys

frozen_north
08-29-2007, 01:21 PM
WOW!!! Dam Freedom dahlin, that was HOT!!!!