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davesmistress
10-27-2007, 12:39 PM
Just a little something I found......:icon043:


"Loving You..."
by Ancient117331


How my thoughts
are racing soooo...
I just whispered aloud -
"I love you...",
and have the softest feeling -
for real,
no teasing.

You 'get' to me so damnably easy...
I don't know or understand why
or how -
you just do.
It's because...
somehow... we... belong.
I know...
silly me.

I melt at some awkward times
and just shake my head at others.
But I want to hold you so tight
and make love to you
and hold you close afterward
and make love to you
and just 'be' with you
and love you.

Woman...the thoughts that just race by
physical... mental...
my stomachs a big knot
and I want to sing,
smile... just laugh...
shake it off...
but can't.

I want you curled with me,
around me,
on me.
I want to be in you -
a part of you...
held so very tight and close...
and never let go.
I want to touch you,
taste...
explore...
mentally, physically...
and more -
so much more.
I want to play
and 'be'
as only we can.

How my thoughts
are racing soooo...
such is the beginning
of 'loving' you...
silly me.

Scorpio8
10-27-2007, 03:57 PM
That's a very well written and hearfelt poem.

Great selection to add to this forum Robin.

davesmistress
10-27-2007, 07:02 PM
Thanks Jeff.....thought we needed something different

frozen_north
10-30-2007, 01:16 PM
Thanks DM, great addition, I loved it.

davesmistress
10-30-2007, 05:09 PM
Thanks for reading it....:)

badlybent
10-30-2007, 06:22 PM
Very nice DM. Thanks for the addition. We don't seem to be getting a lot of poetry lately.

Tigrok
10-30-2007, 06:30 PM
Thank you for sharing this find DM!

davesmistress
10-30-2007, 07:15 PM
Your welcome...No we havent had any for awhile, so I thought that something new was needed....:)