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EroticaWriter
11-05-2007, 09:08 PM
Who was I
Before I met you?
A naïve little girl
So lost and confused.

With aches and desires
I could not undersand,
Why did my body heat
With the touch of your hand?

So you came along
And opened my eyes
To the deepest of passions
Void of all lies.

You led me to a world
I never knew,
Teasing and taunting
As my passion grew.

You knew I’d give in
And want to know more
Of the tender romance
You had in store.

You kissed me deeply,
You held me tight
We made sweet, passionate love,
For all of the night.

I never imagined
It would feel like this
That having you inside me
Would be such bliss.

But the skill of your tongue
And your careful, slow pace
Made me want to stay forever
Wrapped in your embrace.

Thanks for showing me this world
That before I did not know.
Now I am yours forever,
With you I will always go.

Scorpio8
11-05-2007, 09:52 PM
The words come best when spoken from this
thing we call the soul.

Emotions felt as living breathing components
that are as much a part of us as our very skin.

When translated into written verse they seem
to fit in place like pieces of a puzzle that don't
have to be forced but simply glide right in.

This work is just that, the blending of it all
in an exceptional manner!!!

davesmistress
11-06-2007, 07:38 AM
Wow that was both beautiful and Erotic....thanks for sharing that with us.

Suthernlady
11-06-2007, 07:42 AM
Absolutely lovely...I got swept away by your passionate words. Thanks for sharing such beauty from within...