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Patchouli
06-12-2008, 09:32 PM
Authors note: This is my first (and probably only) attempt at writing an erotic story. The story is inspired by true events that happened to me when I was 22 years old. As in movies, inspired by true events means that it didn't necessarily happen in this exact way, and that some parts are embellished for artistic effect. I did use my own name, but changed the name of my boyfriend, since we are no longer together.



Unintended Consequences

Amy glanced across the room and gave a little shy smile before averting her eyes from the four men who were watching her. She knew that they had taken an interest in her, and the excitement of it all caused her to take in a deep breath that pushed her large breasts tightly against the thin silky material of her blouse. Wearing no bra, Amy was well aware that her nipples were clearly visible against the harsh lights in this corner of the bar.

Her short flared skirt did little to hide her privates, and the seat she had chosen offered her lower body very little cover. None of this was through sheer carelessness, however. Amy would never have dared to come to this place by herself. She would never have dressed this way in public, for she knew the sort of suitor this would attract.

Ordinarily.

But on this occasion Amy very much wanted to attract. She would flirt or dance with anyone who solicited her. The reason she acted this daringly was her boyfriend Ralf who sat by himself at the bar, watching her perform for him to satisfy a fetish he'd had for some time.

It had been only six months ago that Ralf had confided in her that he often fantasized about her having sex with other men during their love-making. He confessed that it turned him on when he saw another man checking her out admiringly, and he would later fantasize about her having sex him.

At first Amy was uncomfortable with her boyfriend's obsession. Eventually however, Ralf managed to get Amy to participate in roll playing during sex where she would pretend to be having sex with another man by calling her boyfriend by another name, and acting out various scenarios.

Occasionally she even agreed to go out in public, a club or pool hall perhaps, to get hit on by other men, while Ralf observed the action from a distance, always without the knowledge of the man or men in question. Like on this night.

Amy noticed that the men across from her had become less discreet, and were watching her almost exclusively now. Keeping in mind that she was doing everything for her boyfriend's benefit, she daringly parted her thighs, allowing the strangers across from her an exclusive upskirt glimpse at her nearly transparent panties.

Their facial expressions and hand gestures betrayed that her conduct did not go unnoticed, and when she looked in their direction again one of the four men winked at her, letting her know he desired her; she answered his invitation with a quick smile before looking away again.

Careful not to spoil the event, Ralf watched intently through the mirror behind the bar, noting how vulnerable she really was under the lustful scrutiny of the group of men. Ralf knew that it was only a matter of time before one of them would go talk to her, and the anticipation of it filled him with a level of excitement that nothing else in this world could provide him.

He didn't have to wait long. By the time he had ordered and received his second beer one of the men got up from his table and walked over to Amy, apparently requesting a dance. Obligingly Amy stood up and threw a quick smile in Ralf's direction before being escorted to the dance floor.

This was what it was all about for Ralf. He could feel his heart beat accelerate, and he was beginning to get aroused. He was already looking forward to going home with Amy for a long love-making session while the memory of this night's events was still fresh in his mind.

Amy and her partner reached the dance floor and began moving to the music. Watching his girlfriend dance Ralf began to fantasize. He pictured Amy in the arms of the stranger, slow dancing, his hands caressing her shapely figure. Ralf was a lot more tolerant in his fantasies than he was in reality. While he fantasized about that stranger touching Amy's body and even kissing her, he didn't really want his fantasies taken to that level. A fact that Amy was well aware of, and more than agreed with.

When the song was over, Amy's dance partner led her back to his table, presumably to introduce her to his three buddies. She briefly sat down at their table before being asked to dance again by a different man in the group. Again she obliged and made her way back to the dance floor with her new partner. This ritual repeated until all four guys had had a turn with her.

After her fourth dance with as many guys, she excused herself and made her way to the ladies room. Ralf discreetly met up with her in an area of the bar that was out of sight of the four men she had been entertaining.

Amy gave her boyfriend a warm hug and a kiss and inquired if he had seen enough. The idea of going home and into bed with Amy was extremely appealing, of course, but Ralf enjoyed watching his girl being swooned over so immensely that he urged her to stay. Amy explained that the four strangers definitely weren't gentlemen and thought it best to leave before their alcohol consumption led them to act truly indecently. Ralf knew she didn't enjoy these “adventures” nearly as much as he did and impatiently dismissed Amy's objections as being cowardly and prudish. In reality his own alcohol consumption had affected his judgment, and the prospect of strange men acting indecently toward Amy was turning him on.

Obediently Amy returned to the strangers and Ralf went back to his seat at the bar. He continued his role as a voyeur and watched with growing excitement as his girlfriend entertained the four men. The fact that she was apprehensive about the situation provided him with additional pleasure. He would have liked it a lot less if she had enjoyed it as much as he did.

He wished he could hear what they were saying as he watched the men laugh and lean into Amy, whispering into her ear. Amy's addition to the group apparently made the table very festive as one round of drinks after another was being delivered. Ralf knew that his girlfriend couldn't handle alcohol too well, and he was beginning to have some doubts about the wisdom of having demanded they stay when she wanted to leave.

Almost an hour had past since Ralf had talked to Amy, and he could tell that the alcohol was beginning to have an affect on her. She had become significantly more interactive with the men and that in turn encouraged them to be bolder in the way they interacted with her. Their banter was constantly accompanied by some kind of physical contact with her. At one point one of the men put his arm around Amy's shoulders while another jokingly pushed it away in order to put his own arm around her, as if claiming her for himself.

Ralf was beginning to get uncomfortable and decided that he'd seen enough. At her next bathroom break he would no longer decline her plea to go home.

Time went on but instead of another bathroom break Amy was invited to dance again. This time her partner escorted her with his arm around her. What was worse was that the man had chosen a slow song to dance to. Ralf's heartbeat hastened again as he nervously watched the man place his hands on Amy's hips and pulled her close to him. Amy responded by putting her arms around his neck, pressing her ample breasts tightly against the stranger's chest.

Ralf watched intently as his girlfriend was being lead across the dance floor in an intimate embrace by the stranger. Amy's dance partner didn't keep his hands stationary for long. He began caressing her hips, occasionally pulling her groin into his. When his hands eventually began groping her behind, Ralf swallowed hard and cleared his throat. The limits of what he was willing to tolerate were in danger of being broken.

More and more couples entered the dance floor and it was getting difficult for Ralf to observe his girlfriend. At the same time the man she was dancing with became bolder. His hands were permanently placed on Amy's behind now while she didn't seem to mind at all. Even when he maneuvered one of his hands under her skirt and placed it directly against the naked skin of her cheek she didn't intervene.

Nervously Ralf ordered another beer. The bar was very busy now and Ralf was having a hard time getting the bartender's attention. When he finally received his drink he looked back to the dance floor to find his girlfriend, but couldn't locate her. He looked at the table of the men whom she had joined but she wasn't there either. However, he did take note of the fact that only two men were seated at the table.

Panic stricken Ralf left his seat and went to the restroom area. He wanted to check the ladies room for his girlfriend, but a long line of women waiting for their turn prevented him from sneaking inside. Impatiently he waited for Amy to emerge, but after a while he decided to check the rest of the club instead. No sign of his girlfriend anywhere. Finally he went outside to look for her in the parking lot. Nothing.

He felt like crying, and cursed himself for not leaving when they'd had the chance. The pictures that came into his mind made him feel sick and his hands shook. He was about to go back inside when he heard voices emanating from behind the building. Wasting no time Ralf went to investigate. When he reached the back of the building he carefully peeked around the corner, terrified of what he might discover.

The scene before him stopped his breath. The man who had been dancing with Amy stood before her. Her blouse was unbuttoned, and he was busy fondling her naked breasts. Amy was busy too – her hand was wrapped around his fully erect cock, gently moving back and forth.

Behind his girlfriend was the other man missing from the table. Lazily smoking a cigarette, he had his right hand between Amy’s legs. Her skirt was folded around her waist and her panties had been pulled down to her knees. Her hips were moving rhythmically against the man’s probing fingers.

He heard the first man tell Amy how nice her tits felt as he put his mouth on her right breast and began to suck on her nipple. Amy moaned softly and Ralf watched in disbelief as the man then took hold of his girlfriend around the back of her neck and pulled her face down toward his cock.

Ralf wanted break up the threesome, but lacking the courage, he just watched helplessly as his girlfriend bent over and was made to take the man's stiff cock into her mouth. He was by no means gentle with her and immediately drove his pelvis forward aggressively, as if she were an inanimate object. Holding her head in place with both hands, he fucked Amy's mouth with rapid, almost violent thrusts, showing little regard for her choking noises.

Occasionally he did allow her a short reprieve by pulling his dick out of her mouth, slapping it against her lips and across her cheeks. Again, he seemed to do it with as much force as he was capable of, as if he was punishing her for some unknown offense.

When Ralf heard him produce a series of loud groans he knew the man was coming. Amy was made to swallow as much as she could, but apparently couldn't quite keep up with the large volume of the man's ejaculate, as a good amount did manage to escape her mouth and ran down her chin.

The man behind her was still happily fondling her bare pussy, and as she stood up Ralf saw the sticky liquid on her lips and chin glistening in the twilight of the yard. The recipient of the blowjob wiped his cum off her face then held out his hand for her to lick it clean. Without the slightest hesitation she took his fingers in her mouth one by one and sucked on them until there couldn't possibly be any trace of sperm left.

Something just wasn't right. Ralf knew she'd had a lot to drink, but this was way out of character for her. She had just been forced to give a stranger a blowjob while having her pussy played with, and she should be upset and desperate to get away. Had their little sex game not gone too far?

Just then the other two men from inside the club emerged through the rear service entrance and rejoined their two buddies. They greeted Amy's naked body with hoots of approval and wasted no time getting in on the action. The first of the new arrivals made a bee-line for her tits and began sucking on her nipples, while the other got busy with his hand between her legs, commenting approvingly on how juicy her sweet cunt was.

Ralf could hear his girlfriend moan as she was circulated among the men, being groped, and kissed, and licked, and probed, and he resigned himself to accept what fate was dishing out and take the consequences of their actions. His game had led them here, and this was the extreme result of their playing with fire.

Amy was made to get down on her knees and the remaining three men stood in front of her, freeing their erections from their trousers. Obediently Amy began sucking one cock at a time while using her hands to jerk off two of the other guys. All the while the fourth man who had already been satisfied by her, acted as a referee, making sure each man had roughly an equal amount of time with his dick in her mouth. At the same time he was positioned behind her, playing with her tits and pussy.

Within a few minutes two of the guys were getting ready to cum. They tilted her head back and told her to open her mouth. No sooner did she obey and the first guy released his load. He did the best he could to aim for her mouth, but the initial burst of his cum was powerful and he shot most of it all over her face. The second man had better aim and managed to ejaculate straight into Amy's waiting mouth. Just as before she was made to lick up all of the cum that didn't make it into her mouth, except this time she had to use her own hand to do it. Having finished, the two men then zipped up and went back into the club.

Only now did Ralf notice that he was no longer the only member of the audience. A teenage boy had somehow ended up on the scene and was watching from a different corner of the yard. He looked to be about fifteen years old, and Ralf wondered what he was doing here this late. Apparently he was so amazed by what he stumbled upon that he didn't even make any effort to hide.

The two remaining men discovered him also and encouraged him to come closer. Startled at being confronted by the strangers it looked as though the boy was going to leave, but the men persisted and eventually coaxed him into staying. They asked him if he had ever been with such a beautiful girl before, and upon answering 'no', he was told that this was his chance. They assured him that he could do anything he wanted to her, and encouraged him to start by touching her beautiful breasts.

Cautiously the teen approached Amy but was hesitant to touch her. Ralf watched his girlfriend closely to see how she would react to this new development. He had no reason to believe that she would suddenly reject this newcomer, even though he was clearly a minor, after having already serviced three strangers. She seemed to have resigned herself to her fate after Ralf rejected her pleas to go home earlier. No doubt any resistance on her part would likely be overcome by force at this point.

One of the men pulled Amy's blouse down to her wrists, essentially tying her hands behind her back. He then tried to unzip her skirt from around her waist, and when he didn't succeed right away pulled out a pocket knife and carelessly cut it off her, then did the same thing to her panties still around her knees. Now completely naked and with her hands effectively tied behind her back the men pushed Amy within arms length of the boy.

Again they encouraged him to touch her, this time sounding a bit more demanding. Slowly the boy reached out with both hands and carefully placed them on Amy's naked breasts. It was obvious that he didn't really know what to do after that, so the men coached him on the various ways to fondle breasts. It wasn't long before the kid got comfortable and was smiling from ear to ear. He was clearly enjoying the experience and after a while he was fondling Amy's sizeable breasts with confidence, kneading and squeezing them, occasionally making her yell out slightly when he accidentally pinched her nipples a bit too hard.

The two men looked pleased as they watched their protege gain proficiency in handling Amy's tits and at some point felt he was ready for the next step. They explained that to truly please a woman he must know how to play with her pussy. Making her sit on a nearby crate, they told her to spread her legs. Dutifully Amy complied with the order and presented her neatly manicured vagina for all to see. After a brief female anatomy lesson the teen was again encouraged to treat Amy as his personal sex toy; which he did.

He knelt down between Amy's legs and allowed the fingers of his right hand to comb through her pubic hair. Amy's body greeted the boy's touch with subtle and repeated spasms in the muscles of her lower abdomen and upper thighs; a clear sign of pleasure. He seemed hesitant at first to touch Amy's pussy lips, which were glistening with moisture, but after some encouraging words by the his two “mentors” he quickly began exploring her womanhood with the same confidence as he did her breasts earlier. In no time he was using both hands to pet and penetrate Amy's wet pussy and finally even used his mouth on her.

The two men allowed the boy to practice his newly learned skills on Amy for quite a while before making her return the favor. By now the boy was very comfortable with Amy, and when the two men made her kneel in front of him and pull down his pants and underwear he showed no signs of embarrassment in exposing his erection. Amy no longer needed to be told what to do and gently, almost lovingly, began sucking the young teen's cock.

Surprisingly it did take him a little long to cum, maybe twenty minutes or so, perhaps as a result of some stage fright, but when he did, he did so with gusto. Holding Amy's head with both hands, he fiercely pumped his jizz into her waiting mouth. After Amy licked him clean, the men congratulated him and told him to stick around if he wanted, since the last of the two men still hadn't been serviced, yet, and he could watch if he so chose. He did.

The first man, who had already cum in Amy's mouth earlier, now excused himself and told his buddy that they were going to leave after he was done with Amy. Having said that, he left the yard, except he didn't enter the bar through the service entrance, but instead chose to walk around the building. In doing so he ran straight into Ralf who had no chance of hiding before being discovered.

Startled at first, the man then greeted Ralf like he was an old friend. He then informed his buddy about his discovery and, oblivious to the fact that he had bumped into Amy's boyfriend, promptly invited Ralf to have a go at Amy as well. Before Ralf could compose himself and utter a response the second man, already busy fingering Amy's pussy, shouted over to Ralf and invited him to a twosome, as if Amy were his own property.

Still shocked at being been discovered, Ralf stepped toward his girlfriend and the groping man. The first man, his lust satisfied, proceeded on his way toward the parking lot in front of the building.

Ralf felt surreal as he stood before his girlfriend in the yard. The man still had his hands between her legs, and a few feet away they boy was still watching, but she cared not.

Ralf looked at his girlfriend and she looked back at him, her hips moving involuntarily due to the movement of the man’s fingers in her pussy. Amy didn't seem to recognize Ralf as her face was nearly expressionless and her eyes were unnervingly vacant. It was like he was looking at a puppet.

“Gorgeous, isn't she?” asked the man.

Startled, Ralf looked up at the man who had addressed him. Almost subconsciously Ralf nodded in agreement. Still intimidated by the situation he was unable to utter a single syllable.

“She's real friendly, too,” the man continued. Then, cupping her breasts from behind with both of his hands he asked her, “...aren't you, sweetie?” With that he kissed her on the cheek and gave her breasts a firm squeeze before offering them to Ralf.

“Go ahead, play with her tits.”

Slowly Ralf began returning to the moment. Confronted with his own fantasies turning into reality, he slowly stepped up to his naked girlfriend. Was this really happening or was it a weird dream? Here he was, standing in front of a stranger who was offering him to to fondle Amy's exposed tits! Wordlessly Ralf accepted the man's offer and touched his girlfriend's breasts.

“Nice, aren't they? All natural, too!” Then he told Amy to unzip Ralf's pants and start blowing him. As she had done all night Amy obeyed the man’s request.

Without further ado she unzipped her boyfriends fly while he stood dumbfounded, taking it all in. He was in the strange situation of standing in the backyard of a club being masturbated by his girlfriend while another man played with her pussy, getting ready to fuck her doggy style, and a teenage boy nearby watching it all.

As Amy's soft lips began to envelope Ralf's shaft nature began taking over, and he felt his cock start to stiffen and rise. Amy noticed too and she hungrily sucked on it. This is how the other men enjoyed her, Ralf thought to himself, this is what he watched her do to them, including the boy.

Slowly dropping his inhibitions, Ralf replayed in his mind everything he had seen them do to his girlfriend. He tried to see her through their eyes. He especially imagined what the boy might have thought when he first laid eyes on her flawless naked body, and how satisfying it must have been for him to touch her breasts and lick her pussy and to ultimately have his cocked sucked by her.

And now Ralf was going to see another man enjoy his girlfriend up close and personal while being watched by that same boy, who, no doubt, must be wishing to have one more go at her.

“Fuck yeah!” exclaimed the other man.

Ralf watched him position himself behind Amy. When he heard the sound of a zip he knew he was about to watch Amy get fucked doggy style by a stranger.

Amy moaned softly when she felt the man’s dick ease into her craving vagina, and she continued to suck her boyfriend without interruption. Ralf thought he must now be all the way inside her because his hips bucked against her. He felt her suck with more enthusiasm, so she must like what she was experiencing.

Almost subconsciously Ralf’s hands fell to hold his girlfriend in place, supporting her and balancing her as she was rocked back and forth, as he listened to her enjoying the other man’s penis inside her.

Having established a comfortable rhythm, the man enthusiastically slapped Amy's ass twice and Ralf, shocked, waited for his girlfriend’s protest.

“Oh yeah!” he heard her say as she momentarily took his dick from her mouth. She liked that too, and Ralf just held on to her as he watched the man gave her swaying breasts some rough treatment while continuing to pile drive her from behind. When the man invited the boy to play with her tits again, Ralf had to concentrate hard to hold back his rising sperm. His wildest fantasies were not only being realized, but exceeded by far and he didn't want this moment to end. He knew the other man was getting close to climax by the ferocity of his thrusts, and he was hoping that Amy would allow the boy one more turn.

Ralf was right. The man announced that he was getting ready to cum and wanted Amy to turn around to catch his load in her mouth. Obediently Amy turned around, took hold of the man's hard cock and directed it toward her waiting mouth. Ralf watched his girlfriend hold her mouth wide open as the other man's warm milky sperm splashed on her lips and tongue.

Deeply satisfied the man zipped up and announced to the boy, “There you go, bud. I left her nice and clean for ya,” referring to her pussy, then added, “I know you wanna go again, right?” The boy eagerly nodded. “Good boy!” said the man, before turning toward Amy again. He took her breasts into his hands as casually and as naturally as if they were his property, knowing she would not object, and played with them admiringly for a few more minutes, before finally leaving the yard.

It struck Ralf how the entire night nobody ever gave any consideration as to whether it was ok by Amy for the next person to have “another go”. It was simply understood by all that she would submit to their demands. Even the teenage boy had already learned to treat her that way as he was standing there, waiting his turn.

After the man had left, the boy selfishly positioned himself between her and Ralf, completely ignoring Ralf's presence. Now a lot more confident than before, the teen reached out and put his hands on Amy's breasts and began playing with them just as he had done earlier.

Ralf was astonished that even though the other men were gone, Amy continued to allow herself to be treated this way. What baffled him even more was that he himself allowed the boy to treat Amy this way. Ralf realized of course that the teen had gotten his “authority” over Amy from the other men, and that to him, Ralf was just another guy who got caught watching her.

So he continued to allow the teen to feast on Amy's ample breasts; as did she.

He was a quick learner. He pushed her up against a nearby wall and kissed, and licked, and sucked her quarter sized nipples, while his hands were happily kneading and squeezing her breasts.

When he was ready to give her twat some attention he made her sit down on the same crate as before and, putting his hands on her knees, spread her legs wide apart. Unlike before he confidently knelt between her legs and began kissing her pussy lips immediately. Realizing that he could still reach her tits from this position he continued to fondle them with his left hand, using his right hand to play between her legs.

As he continued to kiss and lick her glistening slit, he slowly inserted his index finger into her. Amy's wet cunt offered no resistance, and he quickly discovered that it could easily accommodate two fingers. With her eyes closed and her head tilted slightly back, Amy had completely surrendered herself to the teen who was now in full command of the situation.

Ralf, having thus been reduced to voyeur status again, decided not to interfere and simply watched as the teen looted Amy's cunt. Her pelvis was writhing in ecstasy against his probing fingers and the intensity of her moans signaled Ralf that she was not only enjoying the teen's oral and manual attention, but was actually nearing orgasm.

The boy, too, must have realized that Amy was getting ready to climax and abruptly stopped his efforts. Evidently he did not want her to cum ahead of him. Instead he told her to stand up, turned her around and made her bend forward at the waist.

Realizing that she was about to get fucked from behind again, Amy braced herself against the wall with her outstretched arms and readied herself for the teenager, who quickly stepped up behind her and, using his right hand, guided his stiff cock into her waiting hole. Amy's heavy breasts swayed and bounced heavily every time the teen's groin connected with her cheeks. Occasionally he reached for her tits for a few seconds before holding on to her hips again.

For another fifteen minutes or so, Ralf watched his girlfriend get fucked in this way. She was very vocal for the last few minutes of her shafting, and at last the teen exploded inside her. When his energetic thrusts slowly subsided, Amy turned and dutifully licked the boy clean. Greedily the teen played with her tits one last time before finally being on his way, leaving boyfriend and girlfriend to each other for the first time in hours.

Wordlessly Ralf walked over to his girl and gave her a long hug before finally escorting her to his car. Her clothes had been effectively destroyed by the men earlier and neither Ralf nor Amy made any attempts at recovering them.

Amy had been naked in public for so long that she showed no signs of shame or embarrassment when her nudity was witnessed by a group of guys near the entrance of the bar. She simply kept walking toward Ralf's car and patiently waited for him to open the door for her, never acknowledging the hollering crowd.

When they got home Ralf finally did get his turn with his girl. He could still smell the other men's cum on her breath and hungrily lapped at her pussy which was still oozing some of the teenagers sperm. But none of this bothered him now. In fact he was turned on by it and, recalling everything that had transpired that night he gave his girlfriend a fucking that they would never forget.

The following day Amy was embarrassed by her actions and revealed that in addition to the large quantities of alcohol she had consumed the men had also drugged her without her knowledge. A fact they had only revealed to her after the fact. She did not know what they had given her, but it had made her unusually docile and compliant, which explained why she had appeared to Ralf as if in a trance like state while being ravaged by the men and the teenager.

Initially this experience had put an end to their “adventures”, but eventually Amy came to terms with what had happened to her, especially since Ralf kept assuring her how sexy he thought it actually was and how he would love to see her do it again, although perhaps not with four or five guys in one night.

Amy didn't know it, but Ralf was already working out a strategy that would eventually pair her up with another teenager, who lived in the same apartment building and whom he had caught staring at Amy in a most admiring fashion on several occasions.

And, knowing Amy's obedient nature, he knew he would ultimately succeed.

Scorpio8
06-12-2008, 09:57 PM
Nicely related story in both its form and content.

Ralf had more than just a little voyeur within himself it would
seem aftering watching this scenario unfold.

Props going out to Amy as well for not hanging foot up Ralf's
ass for letting things get a bit more out of hand than they may
have both bargained for in that situation.

An enjoyable read with a nice balance of erotic action to
help drive the story and the reader.

Suthernlady
06-13-2008, 11:40 AM
You should consider writing more....this was a very erotic. Thanks for sharing it with us here. Take care....SL ;)

Zee Gal
06-13-2008, 01:29 PM
I definitely agree that you should write more!

The more you write, the better it gets, this is already a great start!

Nice detail, good characters, easy to read and follow, and the mood and emotions were very relatable!

I'd suggest letting your fantasies loose in your writings and see what other tantalizing tales you can cum up with!

BTW, love the scent of Patchouli.

Kisses!

Steph

bip909
11-11-2008, 10:25 AM
very nice really great

scotty2hotty
11-13-2008, 09:15 AM
Great story foor a first time post, and I agree you should write more. I was drawn into the dark ally of your story and became a watcher myself. What a turn-on.

Marti
10-31-2010, 09:09 AM
Wow, well done, very erotic writing.

bnewbs
11-01-2010, 09:33 PM
very hot. i enjoyed this story a lot:as-drool:

ashygurl
01-03-2011, 11:44 PM
Great story, very hot. well-written and very detail

etbet
06-07-2011, 08:30 AM
A really good story

el talisman
06-26-2011, 09:44 AM
very nice

dragonsclaw
10-10-2015, 03:41 AM
Great story.