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April
06-17-2009, 04:42 PM
You may love this bar… but I definitely loved this story.

It was a fantastic read from start to finish, full of great details, and a nice little twist at the end.

Thanks you for taking the time to write and share this hot and sexy tale with us :)

SnaKiZe
06-17-2009, 05:38 PM
Wow. What a great story! I kind of figured they already knew each other, but Barely, just barely.

Great flow, and especially good job keeping the fact that they were together so.. uhh, unsaid?
Yeah. i guess i'll stick with that.

twojustfourfun
06-18-2009, 08:02 AM
Very well-written story! Great characters, scene detail and dialogue. Keep 'em coming!

desporado69
06-21-2009, 09:21 PM
I would like to say thank you for telling this story. It was one of the hottest story that I have read.

rebfire
06-27-2009, 08:15 PM
Great story. Well written and hot.

frankjohnmoore
07-23-2009, 11:06 PM
that was a great story, i liked the ending very much, don,t get much better

Kojack1978
08-04-2009, 11:59 PM
Good story, please keep up the good work