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dirtymind_88
07-18-2009, 11:57 PM
Michelle’s Little Surprise


Chapter 4
When Michelle awoke several hours later, she felt like someone had thrown her from a car, and smacked her across the back of her legs with a board before she ever hit the ground. When she tried to move her arm she felt the pain from where Derek had bit her shoulder. Once she was sitting up in the bed she realized that it was dark outside and wondered what time it was. She could smell something delicious cooking but wasn’t exactly sure of what it was. She tried to stand up and walk but the back of her legs hurts so bad that it made her cry out in pain. She immediately heard Derek coming down the hall.

Derek was up at least an hour already and just about had dinner completed. He was still trying to figure things out and wondered if Michelle hated him. He didn’t think she did because she never tried to leave and didn’t try to knock the crap out of him. He’d just finished stirring one of the pots when he heard Michelle cry out from his playroom. He turned the temperature down on everything on top of the stove and headed to Michelle.

When Derek stepped in the room he found her lying on the floor. Apparently her legs were so sore that she wasn’t able to stand up on them. He watched as she looked over in his direction.

“Master I seem to be having some problems standing up and walking. My legs hurt so much.” Michelle exclaimed to Derek.

Derek walked over to her and helped her to her feet. “It’s okay. Let’s get you into the tub so you can relax a little in there. I think you will feel better afterwards.” Derek told her.

“Thank you Master. I think it will help take some of the pain away. May I ask you something Master?”

“You can ask me anything. It just doesn’t mean that I will always answer your question every time. What is it you want to know?”

“When ever we have sex is it always going to be like that? Well what I’m trying to say is will it be that rough every time.”

When Derek looked over at her he could see that she was worried that he would tell her that it would be. It was almost a look of fear on her face. “No my little slave, it wont be like that every time. That was the first time that I have ever been that rough with anyone. That was not intentional. I like a little pain while having fun but I never intended for it to get like that. I actually don’t know what came over me. Well what I am trying to say is that I apologize for hurting you like I did.”

Michelle wasn’t sure what to say after hearing Derek tell her that and then apologize to her for the pain that he had caused. She also thought that since she was the slave and he was the Master that if he hurt her, then that was how it was supposed to be. Finally Michelle started speak.

“Master, it’s okay. Maybe after a nice hot shower or bath, the pain might go away a little. I’m sure I will feel better afterwards.”

Derek helped Michelle get to the bathroom. Once in there he sat her down on the toilet and proceeded to get the water going in the bathtub. He figured it would be better for her to sit in the tub because there was no way she was going to be able to stand in a shower, plus the tub also doubled as a Jacuzzi. He hoped that it might help take some of the soreness out of her legs. Once it was ready he helped Michelle climb into the tub. After she was seated in it he turned on the jets. He could see she already liked being in there because every muscle in her body appeared to relax.

“Is that okay for you?” Derek sincerely asked Michelle.

“Yes Master it is. This is actually backwards.” She commented to Derek.

“What do you mean?”

“Well if you think about it, I should be the one getting this ready for you. It shouldn’t be you getting it ready for me. You’re the Master and I am supposed to be your slave.”

Derek couldn’t help but laugh at what she just said to him. He understood what she meant but it really didn’t matter at this point. Right now what mattered to him was that she would start feeling better. If this didn’t take some of the pain away he wasn’t sure how she was going to go to work tomorrow. He didn’t want to do anything to make things hard on her at work and end up jeopardizing her job. But once he thought about it he kinda already did. If that egg would have went off at the wrong time and in the wrong place she could have ended up in a lot of trouble.

“Sit there and relax. If you need any help when you’re done, just call for me. Okay?”

“Yes Master I will. Thank you.”

Michelle leaned back against the side of the tub and enjoyed the water swirling around her body. The bubbles that the jets in the side of the tub created tickled when they went across her body. Just being in this made her wish she had one at her place. This was something she would enjoy everyday after work.

After sitting there and trying to relax she finally started to try and wash herself off some. She had to be real gentle when she went across the wounds on her shoulder and hips, plus the bruises on the back of her thighs were very tender, even from the touch of a wash cloth. The bruising didn’t seem to feel as sensitive as it did before she climbed in the tub, but no matter what, it still hurt quite a bit too tough any of that area.

Derek finished cooking dinner up for them. He knew it was getting late and that she would have to be up in about seven hours. He didn’t bother setting everything up at the table and figured he would just take it into the playroom for Michelle. When he looked at the clock on the wall he realized that she has been in there for over an hour. He didn’t want to go and check on her if she didn’t call for him but he couldn’t stop himself. When he walked into the bathroom he found out that she wasn’t in there. Immediately he headed for the playroom. When he walked in there he found Michelle sitting there with her cell phone in her hand. Apparently she had just finished making a call to someone.

“Is everything alright?” Derek asked inquisitively.

“Yes Master everything is okay. I was just finishing a call.”

“How do you feel after that bath?”

“I feel a little better but I am still very sore across the back of my legs. I think it’s going to take a couple days for it to stop hurting as much as it’s hurting right now Master. If you’re wondering who I was calling it’s a number for us to call if we aren’t going to be at work the next day. I figure that since tomorrow is Friday, then it would give me three days to heal before I go back.”

Derek was glad that she made that decision. He already knew that Michelle would need more than a day to heal, just to be able to handle a full day at work without suffering a whole lot.

Michelle stayed with Derek for Friday and Saturday. The only time she wasn’t there was when she walked back over to her place to get some different clothes to wear. Most of the time she laid around his house in several different Satin and Lace Chemise, that she would sleep in sometimes. The main reason she picked them to wear was because they didn’t have sleeves to rub against the back of her shoulder on the bite mark from Derek. She knew she was driving Derek crazy being dressed like that but she was having fun watching him squirm when he was near her and then disappear for about fifteen minutes. She knew that he was going into his bedroom and stroking his cock until he shot his load. Michelle figured that once she was feeling better he was probably going to get back at her for teasing him like she’s been doing the last couple of days.

That night Michelle wanted to thank Derek for taking care of her. She knew exactly what she was going to do because when she made the call to work, she also made one other call also. She looked over at Derek sitting on the other end of the couch and started moving over to him.

“Master thank you for everything you’ve done for me for the last couple of days. I know you really didn’t have too, but I just want to let you know how much I appreciate everything that you’ve done.”

Derek had a feeling that she was up to something but he wasn’t exactly sure what it was. He was certain that she was being sincere when she told him that she appreciated everything he’s been doing for her. He watched as she slowly worked her way across the couch towards him. Just watching her sliding over to him while she was wearing a blue Chemise was making his cock hard. He also noticed that she seemed to be moving a lot better than she appeared to have been earlier.

“Well I figured it was my responsibility to take care of you after the way I hurt you. That is something that I hope never happens again.” Derek told her with complete sincerity in his voice and in the expression on his face.

“Well Master I would like to thank you in a special way. Please follow me.” Michelle got up off the couch and started heading towards the hall that lead to the playroom. “Please Master follow me.” Michelle beckoned to Derek.

This was confusing Derek. What exactly did she have planned for him he wondered? Slowly he stood up from the couch and started following her, the whole time his eyes were focused on her ass. He watched her ass slowly go from side to side with every step she took. The more he followed and watched the more he wanted to shove his cock in her.

Once they were in the playroom Michelle led Derek over to the bed. She was surprised he followed her so willingly and never once asked what her plans were for him. “Master please lay down in the middle of the bed. I have a surprise for you.”

Derek did exactly as she asked, even though he was a little suspicious about her intentions. Once he was lying there he watched as Michelle crawled up the length of his body. He enjoyed the little bit of time she spent licking the length of his cock through his shorts. He was already hard just from watching her walk in front of him, that all her licking did was make his cock ache to be released from its confined area. When she moved up to his stomach she lightly ran her tongue up to his navel area and began licking his belly button. He surprised that this was starting to excite him even more which was very strange to him. Never before has any woman ever licked his belly button. He couldn’t believe that he actually liked it.

Michelle was enjoying herself immensely. Not because she was getting wet from what she was doing, but because she knew that Derek didn’t have the faintest idea what she was getting ready to do to him. She looked up at Derek and noticed that he was watching her every move. “Close your eyes Master. I want this to be a surprise for you.” Michelle seductively said to him. When she noticed that his eyes were closed completely she started working her way back up his body. With every kiss that she planted on his chest she could feel his whole body shudder from the touch of her lips. She slowly slid her hands along his arms until her hands were clasped in his. Once her lips were locked with his she started easing his arms up above his head. Slowly she released his hands and slid them down past the head of the mattress to the restraints that she had set up when Derek was taking his shower. Gently she pulled them up and clasped them around his wrists. He didn’t seem to notice what she was up to until he heard both locks click. Immediately she quit kissing him and sat up and smiled at him.

Derek couldn’t believe that he let his guard down enough for something like this to happen to him. He looked at both restraints and noticed that she was using the exact same ones that he used on her. Finally he looked up at her and in a stern voice said. “What are you up too? You know that I am the Master and you are the slave. Release me now and I will lessen your punishment.”

Michelle sat there on top of Derek with a big smile on her face. She was impressed with being able to accomplish this much of her plan. She just hoped that with everything she had planned for him that he would be able to forgive her for doing this to him.

“Master, please don’t be upset with me. All of this is part of the surprise I have for you. I really think you will like what I have planned. I know I am going to be punished for this so I will just keep you tied up until everything is finished.”

Michelle climbed off of the bed and walked into the bathroom. When she returned she was dressed in the exact clothes that Derek made her wear the first night she came over. When she pulled her hand out from behind her she had the flogger in her hand.

“Now Master, it looks like the tables have turned. Now you’re my little pet slave and I am your Mistress. Before we begin I have to go and retrieve a couple more things before we really get started.”

Derek laid there and watched as Michelle left the room. He knew she headed towards the living room and hoped that she wasn’t heading for the kitchen to retrieve a knife, then come back in there and start making fillets of his cock. When he heard her coming back towards the playroom he noticed that she was talking to someone, no, she was commanding someone.

The next thing Derek saw was two women come walking into the playroom, blindfolded and their hands bound together. He noticed that they were wearing some of the crotch less panties, fishnet stockings and high heel shoes that he kept in his slave making cabinet

Michelle looked over at Derek and raised one finger to her lips signaling him to be quiet and not make a sound. She could see he wasn’t happy about what she has done to him, but, she also noticed a slight hint of curiousness in his eyes as to why the other two women were there. She was wondering if he even figured it out that these are the two women from work, Jackie and Kelly, which helped her into her office when she couldn’t move on her own from that vibrating egg that was in her pussy.

“Now ladies, you are to do as I tell you. If you don’t, you will be punished. Is that understood?” Michelle said to both women. “I am your Mistress and I will not be gentle with any punishment that I see fit to use on you.” Michelle was slowly walking full circles around them. She was enjoying how both of them were shaking. Just watching them in their frightened state was starting to arouse her, making her nipples getting hard and her pussy wet.

Derek was actually beginning to enjoy watching her take control of the two unexpected visitors that were standing at the end of the bed. He watched as Michelle walked around them, lightly running her fingers across their nipples, then immediately pinching them hard enough to make them cry out from the pain. He noticed that when Michelle did that to the one girl, the girl bit down on her bottom lip, trying very hard to not make a noise the second time her nipple was pinched.

Michelle slowly walked over to the cabinet and retrieved two sets of restraints. She fastened Jackie and Kelly, each to a separate bed post. She didn’t restrain their legs any because she wanted to be able to move their legs around to any position that Michelle might want to be in. Once she had both of them to where she wanted them, she walked back to the cabinet and retrieved two sets of nipple clamps. When finally she was standing next to Jackie, Michelle reached out and grabbed on of Jackie’s breast, lifted it up and started sucking on her hard nipple. As soon as she heard her start to moan Michelle bit down, making Jackie cry out from the pain. Slowly she started sucking on it again. When she finally finished with her little suck toy she attached a clamp to both of Jackie’s nipples. She could hear Jackie suck in a deep breathe from the pain the clamps were causing.

“Do you like that my little pet?” Michelle asked Jackie. When she didn’t answer her right away she flogged her across her ass.

Jackie jumped when the strands from the flogger made contact with her bare ass. She thought it wouldn’t sting like it did but was definitely wrong in thinking that. She knew she should answer but waited till Michelle, her Mistress, flogged her one more time. She didn’t want Derek to think that she was going to give in immediately. She wanted all of this too look great for him. She already knew that Derek got off on doing all of this and was certain that he would probably shoot his load before any of them ever laid a hand on him. When she felt the flogger on her ass again she finally answered Michelle.

“Yes Mistress I like that. Its making my pussy so wet.”

“Good. I’m glad you like it.” Michelle reached between Jackie’s legs, sliding two fingers into her pussy. She loved the feeling of Jackie’s vaginal walls squeezing her fingers, trying to keep them in there forever. Every thrust of her fingers into Jackie was starting to make her pussy even wetter than it already was. Michelle reached down, shoved her fingers inside of her pussy getting them covered in her juices and then pulled them out and placed them in front of Jackie’s mouth and told her to lick them clean. Michelle moaned while Jackie was cleaning off her fingers. Feeling her tongue gliding across her fingers was making her wish it was her clit instead.

Finally she pulled her fingers out of Jackie’s mouth and walked around to the other side to where Kelly was restrained. She stopped directly behind Kelly and reached around her, taking both breasts into her hands. She had Kelly’s nipples between her fingers, slowly twisting and pinching them, causing Kelly to let out a moan of her own. Immediately she attached the other clamps to Kelly’s nipples.

Kelly was enjoying the attention she was getting. “Mistress that feels good.” Kelly said in a whispery voice. “Mmmmm my pussy is getting wet Mistress.” She could feel her legs actually start to get weak, and then she felt the clamps get attached to her nipples. Instantaneously she sucked in a deep breath of air and tried to not cry out.

Derek wished that he wasn’t restrained at that moment because right now he had three horny women in front of him and all he could do was watch. “Mistress what about me, will the only thing I get to do is watch you get their pussies wet?” Derek asked and then realized that she wanted him to not make any noise. Immediately he saw Michelle release Kelly’s nipples and start to walk along the side of the bed towards where he was laying. He realized that when ever Michelle done something that she was told not to do that he always punished her. Right now though he didn’t see anyway that she could punish him since he still had his shorts on and was lying on his back. What, if anything, could she possibly do to him right then.

“Didn’t I tell you to not say a word? I’m sure that I did and apparently you don’t know how to listen to what you are told to do. Children are punished for not listening and the way I see it you should be punished also.”

Michelle walked back down towards Jackie and Kelly. Immediately she released them from their restraints and told them to take off their blindfolds. She watched as both women uncovered their eyes and became accustomed to the lighting in the room. Once their eyes adjusted she told them that they are to follow every command exactly.

Jackie and Kelly stood there looking at Derek lying on the bed with his hands tied above his head. Each of them looked him over from head to toe, studying every inch of his body from his gorgeous hair, to his chest, then his prominent bulge in his shorts and down along his muscular legs, down to his feet. Immediately both of them were imagining his hard cock inside any of their orifices that he wanted to slide it in to.

Suddenly both of them felt a stinging sensation across their asses. When they both turned around they found Michelle standing there with the flogger in her hand, ready to strike at both of them if need be.

“Now that I have your attention again maybe I can continue telling you what you need to start doing.”

“Slave Jackie, you will remove the little bit of clothes that he is wearing. Once he is lying there naked don’t get any ideas of having some fun with him. He didn’t do as I told him so now he needs to be punished.”

“Yes Mistress I understand.” Jackie replied.

“Slave Kelly, you will go and restrain his ankles to the bottom posts of the bed. You will find the restraints behind me on the chair. Make sure that they are secure. I would hate to have to punish the both you also, even though I am sure that I would enjoy every minute of it.”

“Yes Mistress I understand.” Kelly replied to Mistress Michelle with a slight bow of her head.

“Now, both of you get started. The sooner he is ready the sooner I can commence with his punishment.” Michelle immediately left the room and headed out of the playroom.

When she returned she found both Jackie and Kelly fighting to get his other ankle in the restraint. She could see that he was just doing it to be an ass and immediately she walked over next to Derek and brought the straps of the flogger down hard across his legs, instantaneously causing Derek to quit what he was doing and just laid still.
Derek was surprised by her actions. He thought that she wasn’t serious about any of this and never expected her to actually use the flogger on him. He was sorely wrong in assuming that and wished he had done what he was told. He lifted his head and tried to look down to were the straps had connected with his legs and noticed that if she would have been another six inches higher she would have brought the straps down across his cock and balls. Derek cringed at the thought of that.

Once he quit pulling and pushing his leg in all directions, Jackie and Kelly were finally able to attach the restraint to his ankle. Once they were finished both women backed away. “Mistress Michelle, we are finished with what you wanted us to do.”

“Thank you. Both of you shall be rewarded in a way of my choosing.” Michelle informed them.

“Now how should I punish you?” Michelle said while looking at Derek. “What would be an appropriate way to teach you to be good and do as you’re told? Let me see, I think I know of the perfect way to do this.” Michelle said while walking around to the other side of the bed, slapping the flogger across her hand with every step. She fought to not laugh when she saw Derek flinch a little when she slapped it against her hand.

Derek liked using the flogger on others but when it came to it being used on him he would have rather had a finger smashed with a hammer. Right now there wasn’t much he could do to stop her from using it on him some more, so all he could think of was to somehow try and prepare for anymore lashings that she might intend to give him.

Michelle climbed up on the bed next to Derek and laid down next to him. “Girls come over here, I have come up with a way to punish him and it won’t even involve inflicting anymore pain on him.” She watched as they walked over to where she was laying and waited for their Mistress to give her next command.

This didn’t make any sense to Derek. How did she intend to punish him without inflicting any pain? He laid there and watched the girls walk over to the side of the bed, never once saying a word. He didn’t mind though, because now he was able to get an even better look at them. When he looked at each girl’s pussy he could see a slight glint of wetness from when Michelle was playing with their pussies and tits. He was certain that he would enjoy tasting both of them and definitely wanted that chance. He never realized that he was licking his lips in anticipation of that chance.

Michelle noticed him licking his lips. She knew immediately what he was thinking and also knew he wasn’t getting either of the girls, or her, until she decided the time was right. Slowly she spread her legs and slid her hand down and over her pussy. She already knew she was wet but she still had to touch herself.

“Mmmmmmm that feels good. Now let’s see, which one of you will it be? Kelly come over here and put your tongue to use on my pussy. I want to feel your tongue all over it.”

“Yes Mistress.” Kelly replied. Immediately she had her head down between Michelle’s legs and breathed in the wonderful sent of wet pussy. Slowly she started running her tongue around the outer lips, gently flicking it over Michelle’s skin. Once she made a complete circle she started licking from the bottom up to her clit. She could taste Michelle’s juices and knew that if she shoved her tongue inside that sweet pussy that she would be able to lap up a lot more. She didn’t want that just yet. Instead she headed straight to Michelle’s clit and began flicking her tongue across it somewhat roughly. She listened as Michelle began moaning every time her tongue flicked over her swollen clit.

Michelle was thoroughly enjoying the attention her pussy was receiving. Even after the other day at work when Kelly ate her pussy, she still had trouble believing that she would enjoy having a woman do that to her. She could see that Jackie was waiting very patiently for her Mistress to give her a command. “Slave Jackie, my breasts need some attention. Why don’t you come and take care of them for me. I’m sure you will enjoy doing that.”

Jackie immediately smiled when her Mistress finished talking. “Yes Mistress Michelle, I will enjoy doing that for you. I will do my best to please you.” Slowly Jackie sat on the edge of the bed and cupped one of Michelle’s breasts in her hand. Slowly she started gently kneading her fingers around the succulent flesh in her hand. She watched as Michelle’s nipples began to get completely erect from the pleasure her and Kelly was giving their Mistress. Slowly she lowered her mouth down and wrapped her lips around the hard nipple and began flicking her tongue over it roughly. Instantly she heard Michelle take in a deep breath and knew she was giving her what she wanted.

Derek wasn’t sure how long he was going to be able to last while watching them. Already he could feel pre-cum seeping out of his cock and onto his belly. Just watching Kelly eating Michelle’s pussy and Jackie sucking Michelle’s breasts was driving him crazy. Now he knows how she was going to punish him without inflicting any pain on him.

Michelle looked out the corner of her eye and watched as Derek stared at the sight next to him. She so badly wanted to set him free so he could join in but she was having way too much fun right then with Jackie and Kelly.

After about ten minutes of Jackie and Kelly pleasuring her she commanded them to stop. “Jackie, it looks like Kelly has made a sticky mess of her face. Clean her face off for her.”

“Yes Mistress. It will be my pleasure to clean face.” Jackie pulled Kelly over to her and started licking her face and under her chin. While she did that she lowered her one hand down to Kelly’s pussy. Before she touched her she looked over at her Mistress. “Mistress, is it okay we play with each other?”

“Yes, but just for a little while.”

“Thank you Mistress.” Both girls said in unison.

Jackie immediately went back to cleaning Kelly’s face and started to also run her fingers along the slit of Kelly’s hairless pussy. Feeling a pussy that’s been shaved, or even waxed, made her feel like such a naughty girl because she was always raised that any hair you grew down there, stayed down there. “That was hair that wasn’t supposed to be removed because if helped to cover up a woman’s private parts.” like her mom always said.. She had a very strange family and Kelly was glad that she never turned out like they did. Living this type of life was a hell of a lot more fun.

Kelly’s whole body was starting to tingle all over. Every chance she got she would shove her tongue into Jackie’s mouth and enjoy the sweet taste from her tongue. She was beginning to breathe harder.

Michelle noticed the change in Kelly’s breathing, stood up next to her and whispered something in her ear. The only other one that was close enough to hear what Michelle told Kelly was Jackie, who immediately asked her Mistress in a hushed voice, if she should do the same thing. Michelle nodded in agreement.

Michelle started removing the nipple clips from the girl’s breasts. She didn’t want to take a chance of one of them having a massive orgasm and then someone loosing an eye because the other person’s nipple clip jabbed through someone’s eye and they ended up being injured. With clips in her hand, she backed away and watched as the rest of the events unfolded.

Jackie grabbed Kelly’s hand and shoved it towards her pussy. She was so horny that she just couldn’t take it anymore and wanted someone to play with her pussy also. When she felt three of Kelly’s fingers being shoved inside her, completely up to the last knuckles, she bit down on Kelly’s bottom lip. Not hard mind you, just enough to have a hold of it. She knew right away that neither one of them was going to last much longer.

Derek laid there watching everything. Even though he wasn’t participating physically with them, he was still getting very close to shooting his load all over his stomach. If he did cum all over himself it would be a first time he had ever done that without him stroking his cock or from having sex with a woman.

Michelle was getting close to cumming also but nobody else even noticed. The girls were too involved with each other and Derek was lost in watching Kelly and Jackie. She suddenly heard both girls start moaning very loudly. They had completely quit kissing and licking each other and their fingers were thrusting into each others pussies at a high rate of speed. She watched as both girls’ eyes flew open wide and they announced they were getting ready to cum.

They did exactly like they were told. Immediately, they both climbed over Derek, Jackie’s pussy over his face and Kelly’s over his crotch. Never once did their pussies come in contact with him. Suddenly they both let out a loud cry and their orgasm started. Their juices splashed all over Derek from his head to his crotch. Their fingers were thrusting in and out of their pussies the whole time. Their orgasms seemed to last forever.

That was all it took. Having two beautiful girls shooting their pussy juice all over him and their pussies just beyond his reach put him over the edge. Derek started shooting his cum onto his belly and up towards his chest. Thick streams shot out of his cock in long ropes. He could feel how warm in felt against his stomach and then started to feel something else. Someone started squirting all over him. When he opened his eyes he found out that it was Michelle. Some how she had climbed up on the bed and straddled him between his chest and stomach and began to have her own orgasm also.

When Michelle’s orgasm subsided she laid down on top of Derek with Jackie and Kelly lying on either side of him. “Well Master did you like my surprise for you? I hope you’re not too upset with me? As you can see I even brought some play toys for the both of us. I hope you like them? I know I do.”

Derek tried so hard to make like he was still upset with her tying him down like she did. But after everything that just happened he couldn’t even pretend to be mad. He looked Michelle in the eyes and told her, “Thank you my little slave. You have made your Master very happy. I’m just wondering when I get to actually touch them instead of being on the sideline and just watching.” Derek never got a response.

Michelle, Jackie and Kelly were sound asleep and Derek was still restrained to the bed. Derek could already hear their rhythmic breathing. He tried to rock his body back and forth to try to wake them but it was useless. He was just going to have to wait till they awoke later on. This was an experience he was sure that he would never forget.


Please leave comments and maybe rate my story. You can also e-mail me at: dirtymind_88@yahoo.com

coyotewar6979
07-19-2009, 04:39 PM
Very Good Story cant wait for more

Shick
07-20-2009, 12:01 PM
I've loved every word so far, of all 4 parts. Part 2 had me cummin like a geyser, and I was only part way through. Please keep up the excellent work!

eleven
08-28-2009, 02:12 AM
I really enjoyed the series, thanks for posting!

supban
08-30-2009, 07:19 PM
Keep up the good work. I've enjoyed the whole series. I hope you continue with it.

hcmt02
09-02-2009, 06:21 AM
Very good one!!!

buzz78
10-13-2009, 12:05 PM
great when is the next one