sky so sad

[kaidman]

the sky is clear and gray
so cold yet not chilling
its is filled with mist relfecting my eyes
the tears wont come I always hold them in
my blood is spilt just a drop
the pain is far too real today
everthing is too real so I look to the skies
I hope for rain so my eyes may cry even if it is just rain water
I wish for peace I would give my life a million times over if only to stop suffering

[TelltaleInsanty]

Your words are so expressive. I truly love reading them though this one does sadden my quite a bit.

[kaidman]

sorry for saddening you it is my thoughts on the pain of my friends and I wanted to pour my soul into it

[Pale Rider]

Yes a way with words...

[Landy]

Very well put I am trying to type through tears having just discovered their loss. A very sad day.

[Brigit Astar]

Good poem because youy mesh and combine the exterior--the environment--with your inner feelings.

[kaidman]

all my poems are written without forethought just my emotions exploding from myself

[jessy19]

So sad but nicely written. Keep it up. Love that you express yourself so well :)