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SEVERUSMAX
01-01-2013, 05:55 PM
It doesn't make sense,
In fact it is cruel.
To ask such things of a man to humble him,
to be unfair, to be unjust,
to break him and throw away his trust.

You speak of your pain, and sad it is,
I hurt with you, but also with his.
It is my curse, to suffer with others,
not just with my sisters, but also my brothers.

I care for you and call you friend,
but in truth this I can't mend.
It is for you to fix and to face yourself,
to be honest and spare nothing else.

Look into the mirror and embrace who you are,
then you can shine like a heavenly star.
Cast aside pain, fear, and doubt,
and learn just what it is that you are about.

Be true to yourself and soon decide,
then my dear sister you will have nothing to hide.

These words come from love, not from hate,
nor rage, nor malice, nor to debate.
I seek to give counsel, as a friend should,
to aid your well-being, your personal good.

Know who your friends are, and who they are not,
and know that everyone has blemish or spot.

If you resent me, I will understand,
but to lie to you I simply can't stand.

These are my true thoughts and feelings about you,
wishing you a great year, brave, free, and new.

SEVERUSMAX
01-01-2013, 07:09 PM
Thanks for the feedback.

Chris2547
01-05-2013, 04:23 PM
I agree with Jessy, you should take her advice SEVERUSMAX, good writing.

SEVERUSMAX
01-05-2013, 10:27 PM
Thanks, Chris.