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freedom37803
12-26-2006, 04:21 PM
This is a poem that I wrote for a friend that is going into basic training for the Army at the first of the year. Hope you enjoy....




When you open your eyes,
Cold and Alone,
Breathe Deep.
When you’re running,
Cursing the ground,
Breathe Deep.
When you’re sitting on your bunk,
Missing those you love,
Breathe Deep.

Breathe Deep,
And know,
That in every breath,
You breathe our love.
It floats in the air,
Surrounding you like a halo,
Giving you wings like an angel,
Filling you with strength.

So…when you are feeling weak,
Breathe Deep…
And be strong.
When you’re feeling low,
Breathe Deep…
And feel joyful.
When you’re tired,
Breathe Deep and run another mile!

Remember you are loved,
When you breathe deep.

Tigrok
12-26-2006, 08:17 PM
Great Poem freedom, Thank you for sharing this poem!

davesmistress
12-26-2006, 08:27 PM
Wonderful Freedom...hope that person knows how lucky they are....

freedom37803
12-27-2006, 06:02 AM
I gave it to her for a christmas present in a frame...she nearly cried. I am assuming she liked it...lol

Aloha Jack
12-28-2006, 09:55 PM
That should have earned you some deep breathing exercise! It was good.

freedom37803
12-29-2006, 07:51 PM
LOL...if it had been a man I had given it too...maybe...lol