Forum: Story Previews/Request for comments

O.k. so here is my story a little short i just would like some oppions... it is not complete just so you know Percy Jackson : Wet Dream It was a normal day for Percy at Camp Jupiter, he went to the normal classes with the others and went to war games in the Field of Mars at night, but he...

The start of part 1: "12:00pm" the clock next to Demi's bed reads, "OH SHIT!" she thinks to herself while jumping out of bed. She rushes into the bathroom to get dress, comes back out grabs her phone and heads out the door to her small sports car. "I have to make it on time!" she says as she pulls...

Until last week I would refer to my sister-in-law Emily as "that slut". she dressed like a slut, talked like a slut, and as far as I knew, fucked like a slut. I don't call her "slut" anymore. Not since she started breast feeding me. I always resented my older brother Allen for marrying her,...

Hi, I've been writing my second story for a while now and felt like posting it for comments. It's very long compared to the average story around here, currently at 16020 words. I've you've got the time and patience to read it I'd love to hear some constructive criticism, or even just a great...

I have an idea for a story which involves the eventual sexual subjugation of a white expat couple that has moved to Singapore. They are originally from England but move to Singapore in order to escape the dire economic situation there and to take advantage of the small city-state's booming...

Can one of you wonderful mods move my story "Between Us" that is under general incest story submission and move it to the incest bro/sis section? I'll love you forever :)

This is a story idea I had. It is about a younger woman falling for an older married guy that she met at her workplace. Following are the beginning paragraphs. Just wondering if I should go ahead and finish the story. There seems to be a lot of older female/younger male stories, but not so many...

"You are invited to the American Idol Dinner for the cast, crew and singers from the show. Please RSVP to..." Carrie Underwood read the invite she just got in the mail, she was so happy to see and couldn't wait to tell her husband Mike Fisher. She picks up the phone, "Baby! Idol is doing a dinner...

Love stories of twins(twin brother and sister) ,are there any bro-sis twins on this site ? If so would love to hear your story also i've seen hundreds of vid of twin sister getting it on but never of brother and sister twins does anyone know if there's a vid of such a thing and if so...

"5:00am" The alarm goes off next to my bed. " "Why the hell am I getting up this early?" I think to myself knowing the reason was because family vacation started today! Everyone was going! My mom, Dad, Sister and I. I wonder down the hall towards the bathroom, "MORNING BRO!!!!" My sister yells...

Hey everyone out there, I've been writing sex stories like crazy for the past month. In the Bondage section. But nobody other than the same person responds. I feel so... I don't even know. You guys mind going over and seeing if my stories are worth anything? It'd be greatly appreciated. They are...

You need to write your stories in paragraphs. Plot alone won't make a good story.

I’ve been trying to work something out in my head since I saw it a few days ago. I was at the public pool in town with some friends the other day. I don’t normally go there since my parents have a pool in out back yard, but some friends wanted to go, so I tagged along. All sorts of people were...

“Sis?” he said softly. “Upstairs,” he heard her voice say. He climbed the familiar brown carpeted stairs until he reached the landing. Unsure of direction he guessed left and headed down the hall toward he and Laurie’s old bedrooms and the shared bath. Stepping to the entry to her...

Lagos Payback What do you think? Wrote content this morning. No sex yet. Also looking for writing partner. Message me if interested. Lagos Payback I would like to tell you about an amazing adventure that my wife and I just experienced in Lagos. Formerly the capital of Nigeria, Lagos...

At long last I am in a somewhat stable situation where I can actually write a story and complete it. I am currently working on a short erotic play, but after I finish it, I will go back to Darling Daughter and write Chapter II. Look out for it in the near future!

:icon093: My creative writing juices are purging through my veins again and would luv this time to get something written, which others could give me ideas on. The basic story I have in mind is like a couple maybe even a family taking a vacation deep into uncharted jungles in the amazon or...

Initiation – Part 1 Larry and Mona have gone to a swinger’s club. Mona was very reluctant but Larry talked her into going just to see what takes place. Little did she know that it was ladies initiation night at the club. Larry thinks he has talked Mona into having another man perform oral sex...

Ok, although I'm still a bit of a newbie, this is a story been working on for a little while. I don't claim to be a great writer, but I hope members enjoy. This is just a teaser of the first chapter I have, and wanted thoughts on what people think of it. I've done about 6 Chapters so far. Its...

This is a story I submitted in three parts a couple years ago about a brother and sister who didn't get along until one day when he had to stand up for her. I'm thinking about writing another story, so I'd really appreciate any feedback. Here's a little snippet. to catch her.* I wanted to hear...

Hey guys! I'm a new writer and need some advice on my beginning paragraph. I have decided to write multiple chapters for this story and have therefore decided not to post any chapters until the entire series is completed. That way I have free reign of the story the entire way through. The first...

So, as I posted about in this thread I'm writing an interactive story, hopefully to post here. I've written a start on it, and I'd like to get some comments about it so far. It's fairly lengthy as sex stories go, and I've only just started so it's not going to be for those people who like a...

It's a series of idea's that I'm running with, and want some feedback about how the opening of it all is. It's pretty much a linear storyline after the beginning which is the end of the first section. in the space of the time continua, But I need feedback. Here she lays by my side, her naked...

A Clockwork Orange girlfriend Korey Flad Aka clockwork orange Demi Lovato pulled out a sharp and perfect size knife from her pocket; she turned it around over and over in her hand as held it in her right hand. The blade was shinning in the dim light as Demi moved slowly over to the helpless...

< Link to picture of my mom http://www.sexstoriespost.com/forums/album.php?albumid=316&pictureid=2300 > Her moans got progressivly louder as she bounced back and fourth on my dick. I looked down at her perfectly shaped ass and her two lower back dimples and traced them up to her curly...