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A story that's forming in my head right now about a specialized 'Ranch' where women are sent, and even apply voluntarily, to be properly 'horse-trained' and domesticated/tamed/behaviourally-corrected.
It would involve Pony Girls, of course, but not exclusively.
Themes would include voluntary and involuntary submission, subjugation and Training with everything that goes along with such.
Not sure how long it would be--I'm aiming for a 'novella' length, rather than a major work.

It was inspired by Husband showing me the latest purchase of his from Dofantasy.com titled;
Sluts In Training 2 - The Stables

Suffice to say...it's a work that turned me into a pink waterslide by page 22.
Has a nice little 'Hitchcock' style twist at the ending that's quite satisfying and bit funny...in a dark way. :)

I'm pretty sure he's also got something in mind for my future based off this story--I just wonder when I'm gonna find out?? ;)

My questions are;
Would anyone like to read this?

Would you like an Original Character as the Main Character?

Would you prefer me to use Myself as Main Character?

Suggestions, things you specifically want to see??


~Marlene~

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Updated 04-26-2012 at 10:05 PM by Marlene38EE (added info)

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  1. crond's Avatar
    I'd like to see this story, sounds like another winner to me. I think the main character should be sent there against her will. It doesn't necessarily have to be a full on abduction like Breeding Marlene. It could just be her boyfriend sends her there over her objections or something like that. There should be some reluctance and resistance otherwise you have nowhere to go with the character. I personally have no preference whether you base her on yourself or come up with a new character. Either way I'm sure you'll make it work. I'm familiar with the comic you mentioned by Erenisch. His work is really good, any story inspired by him should be fun to read.
  2. ThrobbinHood's Avatar
    sounds like a hottie to me.
  3. Marlene38EE's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by ThrobbinHood
    sounds like a hottie to me.
    Thank-You for saying!! :D
  4. Marlene38EE's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by crond
    I'd like to see this story, sounds like another winner to me. I think the main character should be sent there against her will. It doesn't necessarily have to be a full on abduction like Breeding Marlene. It could just be her boyfriend sends her there over her objections or something like that. There should be some reluctance and resistance otherwise you have nowhere to go with the character. I personally have no preference whether you base her on yourself or come up with a new character. Either way I'm sure you'll make it work. I'm familiar with the comic you mentioned by Erenisch. His work is really good, any story inspired by him should be fun to read.
    Thank-You very much for saying!!! I really appreciate your comments and input!!

    It's....really good, that story.
    Too good, I nearly slid off the sofa reading it!!

    Your idea and where I'm generally coming from mesh really well. :D
    Her husband drops her off, then leaves after signing the papers, and such...reluctance/resistance as you said. She has no real choice but to agree to it all after the 'tour' and interview as she's got no way home, and as the Ranch is now responsible for her safety, they won't let her walk out into the countryside.

    I'd like to try a different character, because I'm...too submissive to really be able to get the right tone I want that I think readers would want.
    The character I plan to use is based (with her full and gushing permission) on a friend of mine, very closely--actually I'm only changing her name and adding to her wardrobe.
    Her take on it?
    "You want to use me as the main character in a story like that eleven-chapter monster you're writing?? YES!! Thank-You!!"
    I'm paraphrasing, but not by much, and she knows the story also, it's one of her favorites by Erenisch.
  5. ROCKNROLLER's Avatar
    Can't wait to read it Marlene! xxx
  6. Marlene38EE's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by ROCKNROLLER
    Can't wait to read it Marlene! xxx
    Already started work on it. :D
    Thank-You for saying, encouragement is much appreciated!!