I wrote this awhile ago, thought I posted it but I guess not. Feel free to give me any feedback you may have, enjoy.
The Vacation:
The sun reflects off the ocean as it slowly sinks in the sky, the warm breeze flows over your resting body. Your gently swaying in the hammock, book in hand, enjoying the fleeting daylight. You hear the waves crashing into the sand not too far off, the smell of the flora and salt water fills your senses. You’ve been on the island for a few days now, the peace of it all relaxing away the stress and hurry that has been building for so many years, you feel invigorated, young again. You close the book and your eyes, enjoying the last few rays of sunlight, allowing your senses to soak up the moment. You slowly rise from the hammock, your bare feet touching the soft grass, still wet from the afternoon shower. You walk back towards the house, it’s a rental but it’s feeling more and more like home. I’m lying on the patio watching the sun sink down behind the ocean, sipping on a margarita. Normally you wouldn’t drink margarita’s but these are real ones; tequila, cointreau, just a dash of sours over rocks, no salt or sugar. I fix you a drink, handing it to you as you come onto the patio, finding a seat on the other lounge chair. We sit in silence for a long time, just enjoying being there, our hands touching just enough to feel each other’s presence. As the sun dips below the waves, the sky filling with streaks of red and orange, you slowly rise and walk into the house. I wait a few more minutes, listening to the birds and the waves, collecting my strength for the night ahead, before I retreat to the house.
I can see you lying chest down on the bed, your leg off to the side taking up half the bed. The soft light highlighting your features, I catch myself holding my breath admiring your beauty, the gentle breeze from the open window blowing across you. I lay next to you, staring up into the evening sky, the first few stars becoming visible. My fingers start caressing your back, barely making contact with your soft skin, absentmindedly exploring your back. My fingers move down your spine, across the curve of your ass, softly up your sides, along your neck, and back to your spine. Moving of their own accord, slowly and leisurely tracing patterns on your skin. I roll onto my side facing you, my hands becoming more deliberate in their motions, tracing a similar pattern very lightly across your back. I run a finger up your leg, barely contacting your skin, running it up across your hip, following the curve of your ass, and up your spine. My lips move close, planting soft kiss on your neck, working up towards your jaw line and back down. I take my time exploring your soft silky skin with my mouth, my fingertips exploring as well, leaving no exposed skin untended. I untie your top, it just getting in the way of my meanderings, pulling the strings out of the way. My kisses work back up your spine, across your neck, softly kissing your ears, gently blowing across them.
I’m over you now, you can the heat radiating from my skin just inches above you, and you turn over to meet me. Our lips locking in a slow passionate embrace, your arms moving up around my neck, your fingers moving through my hair. We break our kiss as I move, straddling your body, now directly over you. A soft smile on your face as I lean in for another kiss, our skin now just barely touching. Your nipples rub against my chest, you top lost in the shuffle, causing them to harden. Our tongues begin dancing, slowly entering each others mouths, exploring each other. Your soft lips sweet against mine, your tongue playing with mine, soft moans that never get to escape our lips. Time means nothing as we make out on the bed like we’re seventeen again, a chance to do things we should have done many years ago but that seem better saved until this night. Eventually our lips part, glowing smiles on both our faces, our eyes meeting for a brief moment.
I continue my exploration of your body, kissing across and down your soft neck, across your collarbone. My fingertips tracing circles on your smooth stomach, stopping before they reach your bikini bottoms. You run your hands through my hair, playing and guiding my explorations. I plant kisses down your chest, right between your breasts, down your silky skin. I use a finger to gently tickle your belly button while I place soft kisses on your stomach, working my way down your body. I stop when I reach your bikini, kissing across your stomach and then working my way slowly back up. I slide a hand underneath you, running my fingers across your back while my mouth explores your stomach. I kiss across the underside of your breasts, working in circles around them, slowly tightening their radius, working towards you nipples. You rub your feet slowly and gently up and down my legs, the passion slowly building up inside of you. I finally reach your nipples, gently suckling it into my mouth, only briefly, before moving on to your other breast starting my slow circles back over. By the time my mouth reaches your other nipple my fingers have worked their way south, lightly tracing patterns across your hips and upper thighs, purposely avoiding your mons, at least for now.
I trace my kisses once more across the silky skin of your stomach, this time not stopping when I reach your bikini bottoms. I plant kisses across your hips, down your thighs, and back up the other side. I move my hands up and place them at the top of your bottoms, my eyes meeting yours once again, the slow nod telling me all I need to know as I slowly pull your bottoms down and off. You are now very aware of the cool breeze blowing across us, the moistness on your lips sending a chill up your spine as the wind blows across you. I lower my head back down, planting kiss on your now bare hips, working across and around, once more avoiding your mons. But it cannot be avoided forever, my lips kissing around, just avoiding your lips and clit, your hands moving more desperately through my hair. I plant three soft kisses down your lips before placing my tongue at the base and licking up your slit, tasting your juices that are now glistening across your lips, a soft moan escaping from your lips. My tongue continues up, licking across your clit, before breaking contact with your body. My lips return to your body placing soft kisses on your clit. My fingers running patterns across your hips and thighs, sliding across your stomach, tracing along the underside of your breasts. I lick back down, across your clit, and down your lips, searching for that hole hidden somewhere under there.
My tongue slides into your hole, slowly entering, exploring, taking my time exploring your pussy, paying considerable attention to that little spot just inside of you on the bottom of your hole. My fingertips toy with your clit, lightly touching and circling it. My tongue slides in and out of you, gently fucking you, my fingers now rubbing your clit, your moans increasing, the hours of foreplay pent up inside of you being prepared for release. My tongue slides out of your pussy, licking its way back up to your clit, my finger replacing it inside of you. I slowly fuck you with first one finger, then another, sliding in and out of you, rotating as they move. My fingers pick up their pace as my lips find your clit once again, gently sucking it into my mouth, my tongue encircling your clit, licking it. Then I gently bite down on your clit, my tongue furiously working it inside my warm wet mouth, I moan into you the vibrations of my lips on your clit just enough to push you over the edge. I feel your pussy tightening on my fingers, sucking them deep into you, I quickly move my fingers up to your clit furiously working it as your orgasm is unleashed. I move my lips down to your pussy, licking and sucking your juices as you climax. Your back arching, cry’s escaping your lips as you cum on my face. I continue licking as your orgasm subsides, you catch your breath and look down on me, whispering “that was amazing.”
I smile in response as I crawl up the bed towards you, our lips meeting again, tongues dancing, while I share your flavor with you. Your hands once again on my neck, pulling me into you, your legs rubbing against mine. I wrap my arms around you, lifting you up into me, rolling you over on top of me. You seize the opportunity, breaking our embrace, you kiss down my neck and onto my chest. Your hands moving across my skin, your lips kissing my chest and nipples, exploring me as I did to you. You kiss down my stomach, your fingers tracing down my sides, you stop as you come to my shorts. You pause for a moment, as if determining how to move forward, before you run your fingers across my shorts, your fingers just grazing the top of my now rock hard cock. Your lips gently kiss my fabric covered cock, teasing me with what’s to come. Your hands grab the top of my shorts and pull them down and off my body, following your bikini into the great unknown. Your fingers rub across my exposed cock, down the shaft, playing gently with my balls. Your tongue slowly licks up the shaft, barely touching it, stopping just before you reach the head. You hold the shaft in your hand, your tongue slowly licking across the head, tracing slow circles around it before finally sucking the head into your mouth. You gently suck on the head of my cock, your fingers slowly stroking my shaft into your pretty lips. Slowly you take more of my cock into your mouth, your strokes getting shorter, your tongue swirling around my cock, teasing the sensitive spot on underside of my shaft by the head. You slowly pull my cock out of your mouth, until just the head is still inside, sucking hard on the head before sliding it slowly back inside. You slowly pick up your pace, your mouth now bobbing on my cock, our eyes meeting for a brief moment and you know the great pleasure you’re bringing me. From my soft moans and the tightness in my balls you can feel the orgasm building in me. You stop your bobbing, holding my cock deep in your mouth as your tongue continues to assault me. You slowly ease my cock deeper and deeper into your mouth until my cock is just at the base of your throat. The feeling is indescribable, incredible, and too much for me. I let out a moan of warning as my cum rushes to escape, moaning your name as I cum in your mouth. You continue to stroke me while sucking the head of my cock, pulling ever last drop out of my cock. I lay there, staring up into the stars, temporarily spent. You finish cleaning my cock and crawl up the bed towards me, lying down beside me. “That was incredible” is all I can say.
We lay together side by side for several minutes, both of us regaining our strength. You run your fingers down my chest whispering “ready to go again?” A week smile grows on my face “all in good time my dear.”
I rise up, picking you up and lying you on your stomach, my legs straddling yours once again. I place my hands on your shoulders and begin rubbing, working my fingers deep into your skin, trying to remove the years of strain and stress. My hands continue their work, moving down and across your back, kneading your flesh into submission. I work my fingers down your spine, my thumbs working in small circles emanating from the spine and moving outwards. I work my fingers into your lower back, careful not to hurt you, I rub your skin in circles, relaxing the muscles. My hands slide down onto your ass, kneading and squeezing your cheeks, working my fingers near your pussy but purposefully avoiding any touch. I work down your legs, taking each one individually, rubbing your thighs and calves, working my fingers deep into the muscle before moving over and repeating the procedure with your other leg. I take your feet into my hands, rubbing them gently between my hands and with my fingers.
I slide my hands back up to your ass, working it over once more, my fingers now teasing and grazing across you lips as I work. I work a finger across your lips, working small circles around your slit, before slowly sliding a finger up inside your pussy. A moan escapes your lips as I slowly slide the finger in and out of your now soaking hole. I work another finger into you, pumping them in and out of your tightness. I lower my head and start planting kisses up your spine stopping when I reach your neck. My cock is pressed against your ass, you can feel the hardness against the soft skin. I slowly pull my fingers out of your pussy and you know its time, rolling over underneath me you are met by my fingers still glistening with your juices. You take my hand, guiding my fingers to your mouth, sucking them into your mouth cleaning your juices off before letting the fingers go. I lower my head and press my lips against yours, embracing once again, we can feel the desire deep within both of us. You spread your legs for me as I return my fingers to your hole, sliding two inside of your to make sure that your ready, and you do not disappoint. I remove my fingers, guiding my cock to your entrance and slowly working into you, our tongues dancing within our embrace. As my head finishes working into you I break our kiss, looking deep into your eyes as I slide my cock all the way into you, holding it there, both of us enjoying the fullness of the moment.
I pull nearly all the way out, just the head remaining inside of you, before I thrust myself back into you. Your legs wrap around me as we get into a rhythm, you meeting my thrusts with your own, working me deeper. Our lips meet once again, or tongues entwining as we continue the rhythm of our thrusting. I slide a hand down to your clit, teasing and playing with your clit, my thrusts picking up as we work towards our climaxes. Your hands are clinging to my back, your fingers digging into me as our rhythm picks up, my fingers furiously working your clit. Our lips break their embrace, both of us breathing hard now, moans escaping your lips. My lips move down to your breasts, licking and suckling on your nipples, pulling them into my mouth then releasing moving on to the other. Your moans and cries are louder more desperate, my fingers squeezing your clit as I thrust into you. I suck a nipple into my mouth, attacking it with my tongue, then I gently bite down just as I squeeze your clit and you go over the edge. Your pussy squeezing my cock, your legs pulling me deep into you, your fingers digging into my back as your orgasm erupts inside of you. “Lauren you’re so tight on me, oh fuck” I say as your orgasm sets off my own, my hot cum shooting up inside of you, my thrusts finally slowing as we both finish.
We lay together for a minute, gathering ourselves, coming down from our highs. I slowly pull out of you, my cock covered in both our juices, lying next to you. I feel you moving around and then your mouth is on my cock, cleaning the juices off. “You are an amazing woman” I say looking down as you finish your work.
“You’re not too bad yourself.” You reply crawling up to lay next to me. I pull your body against me, my hand resting across your stomach. What we have is hard to describe, it’s not love, but its more than lust, it just feels right. All these thoughts disappear as we slowly drift off to sweet dreams together.
A very hot read sundanceai, thank you for sharing your tale with us ;)
Don't worry... it only seems kinky the first time ;)
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sundanceai (11-01-2010)
very nice,,,,thanks
frankjohn69:tnge
sundanceai (11-01-2010)
Probably not qualified to critique - people here with a gazillion posts.... But I liked what you did... The first paragraph was excellent - establishing your theme and transitioning to your story. A close referencing your theme again would have been nice. As it is all are racing to check vacation plans.
sundanceai (11-01-2010)
Thanks for your story.
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