Next chapter will be posted this sunday (July 15)
A significant change in the story will happen, anybody care to guess what?
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 31: Company
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Leia flinched as another light winked out on the display, the battle to destroy the death star had started only ten minutes ago and they had already lost half their fleet. The Empire knew they were coming, Leia had no idea how they could've predicted this attack but the loss of ships proved otherwise.
"Call for the retreat." Leia said hoarsely to the generals.
"Princess we will never have another opportunity like this again!"
"This isn't an opportunity it's a massacre, now call the retreat!" Leia demanded.
The General nodded and gave the command, Leia watched as all the blue dots on the screen did a complete turn around and headed towards the exit routes. Her eyes locked on to red squadron, the screen didn't designate which fighter was which but Leia was still hoping something would tell her which one was Luke. A large group of tie fighters were bearing down on them several of red squadron's lights disappeared but Leia was sure Luke was still alive, then the power shut off. The whole temple was dark.
"What happened?" A voice shouted.
"Someone blew the generator!"
"Back up power's not responding!" Voices shouted at each other trying to troubleshoot the problem though the feeling of an impending assault was growing quickly.
"Princess I think you should leave." Someone said tugging at her elbow.
"No, I want to know what's going on." Leia snapped back shaking her elbow free observing the chaos around her.
An explosion rattled the temple leaving the room eerily quiet.
"Major what in blue blaster bolts is going on!" The security chief barked into his radio cutting the silence.
"An elite team of storm troopers has entered the base sir, we're severely out gunned and underprepared!" The man shouted back through the static filled radio.
"Pull back to corridor eight, you need to hold it while I evacuate the senators and generals." He growled back.
A long silence grew as the impending feeling that the Major was no longer around to reply.
"Major respond!" He yelled into the radio.
"I think it's best we leave." A nearby senator advised.
"I agree, everybody move to the nearest hanger." The chief said waving people through the door.
The Chief drew his blaster and lead the group through the now silent hallway.
"Something's not right, there should be blaster fire or explosions." The Chief said in a worried tone. He keyed in the code to the hanger door and they opened with a whoosh.
The group hurried into the hanger eager to escape the danger behind them, the doors closed suddenly making a loud bang, they looked forward and saw rather than leave the danger behind they had stumbled right into it.
"So glad you could join us." A red man with hideous black tattoo's snarled through yellow teeth.
A dozen black armored stormtroopers had their weapons trained on them and right in the center was the tattooed man Leia now recognized as the man on the Star destroyer who had tried to force her into giving up their plans.
"Surprised to see me princess?" He grinned evilly.
"Darth Maul, you're looking as awful as always." Leia sneered.
"I would advise your security chief to lower his weapon, I would hate to make a mess."
"Do what he says we're clearly out matched." She nodded, the security chief slowly lowered his weapon as instructed.
"You rebels always surprise me, just when I think we've beaten you into submission you mount a rag tag assault and assume you can win."
"We will never sit by and allow you to dominate the universe, we will fight you until our very last breath and even then we will pass on our cause." She spat angrily.
"Yes I am aware, you suffer from that nonsense known as hope, but I have a solution for your silly notion. I plan on breaking every single person in your little rebellion and anyone affiliated with you."
"And just how do you expect to do that?"
"Very simply, we will gather up every rebel in the galaxy and force them into the service for the Empire. Some will become our sex slaves breeding a new generation of warriors the other will be forced into hard labor, our dream is to remake the galaxy in the Sith image. All will bow to our power by the time we are done, and your little group will make a nice first addition." The Sith explained his intentions calmly.
"Your plan is sick and twisted!" Leia yelled in disgust.
"You have no need to worry, you will be allowed to escape."
"And just why is that?" Leia asked confused by the sudden turn of events.
"Because freedom has a price, I know your bold attitude is the true heart of the rebellion. Without you the rebels would fall apart thus making it impossible to weed out the traitors and gain new slaves, so I am going to give you two choices, stay and allow the rebellion to break apart, or escape and deliver us thousands of slave as a byproduct." He smirked.
"I will never let you win you maniac the rebellion will grow stronger and the next time we meet will be when I spit on your dead corpse." She growled.
"So you choose freedom then, silly girl you will only feed our never ending machine. You wont get of that easy though, I'm going to give you taste of what the women of your rebellion are in for. To leave you will have to fuck me." He laughed bitterly.
Leia was shocked she couldn't believe this man he was completely insane. But was he right? If she continued the rebellion would she only be progressing the Empires quest for domination? For now it didn't matter, she had to escape and then make a decision when her mind was clear.
"Very well." She muttered.
With a grin Maul removed his robes and dropped them to the ground with a thud, letting his raging hard on free. Leia moved forward knowing what her job was she knelt down in front of his cock embarrassed to be doing this in front of her fellow senators. She put one hand on to the shaft and slowly began to stroke bowing her head in shame.
"I'm sure you can do better than that princess." Maul prodded.
Leia's anger flared momentarily, she couldn't believe how twisted this man really was, but she knew he was right if she ever wanted to escape this torture she would have to do better. She quickened her hand furiously fapping his cock making Maul moan softly. Leia decided that if she wanted to leave she would just have to get over her pride, besides her captured friends were in for a far worse treatment she was sure. She put her soft lips to the head of Maul's dick and licked the first bit of salty pre-cum. It tasted funny she thought, different than any other cum she had had, it almost called to her and invited her to have more.
Her lips locked around the tip of his cock as her tongue swirled around the head. Her hand still worked steadily making sure to keep a constant rhythm but her other hand had drifted underneath her dress and was now rubbing her pussy. She wanted to stop and insist she was disgusted but truthfully she was more turned on then ever.
Leia started to take the cock further and further into her mouth until she was finally deepthroating the large piece of meat, her hand rubbed her snatch harder and her now free hand had moved on to her tits squeezing and pulling them.
"How about we let those free." Maul smiled devilishly, then ripped the front of Leia's dress exposing her breasts. The tight white dress Leia always wore would show underwear if she wore any so she had made a habit of never wearing it with her signature dress though at this moment she regretted that decision.
Maul pushed her onto her back and lifted the bottom of her dress, he quickly slammed his prick straight into her pussy. Leia winced in pain from not being fully prepared, his thrusts were brutal and violent, he clearly was making sure he obtained as much pleasure as he could and didn't care what Leia was feeling. What she really was feeling was pain, it felt like his dick was plowing straight into her stomach, his hands pulled and groped her tits as hard as he could.
Leia panted desperately trying to regain some breath, Maul seemed to have put it into overdrive speeding up each pump. She couldn't believe the speed Maul had managed to achieve, from the sound of skin smacking together Leia was sure she would sore for the next several days. Though Maul was brutal with each thrust she could feel the sense of pleasure creeping in, in fact she was beginning to enjoy his malicious assault. She tried to deny the fact that a beast such as Maul could give her any sort of pleasure and yet with each vicious thrust her pussy shuddered with pleasure.
"Sir, I don't mean to interrupt but the others will be here shortly." A stormtrooper hesitated. Maul looked at the trooper and gave a primal growl.
"You're right." Maul hissed angrily realizing the trooper's point.
"Sorry princess but it looks like I'll have to cut this date short, I'm having company over." He laughed mockingly.
Maul gave two more quick thrusts and let his seed explode deep inside her, stream after stream of hot cum sprayed into her until it was leaking out.
Maul got off of her and redressed.
"I would leave soon before my associates arrive, they are not as merciful as I." Maul said before walking out.
Leia laid on the floor for what seemed like forever trying to gather her breath and thoughts, slowly she stood up and looked over her torn dress. She rubbed her sore pussy and entered the nearest ship. She set the coordinates to a random planet and soared off into the galaxy. Leia stared off into the ever expanding galaxy. The death star remained in space dominating everyone and everything, the Rebellion was scattered and dismantled, She had no idea what to do or if Han and Luke were even still alive, and it seemed the Empire had even worse plans for the galaxy.
The Rebels had lost...
End A New Hope
Well there you have it the end of episode 4, hope you all enjoyed it and are ready for episode 5!!!!!
A nice major change. Now you are completely changing star wars... In a good way.
Nice story loved it
Hey, I've been reading your story for a while now and finally decided to make an account specifically because of it. The amount of skill, and more importantly effort you put into you writing is impressive- and rare. So, now that I've thrown some compliments your way (they were sincere, I assure you), I do have a request concerning episode five. I have previously read at least two variations of an event in which Leia is taken by a wampa, one I believe by an artist/writer by the name of shabby blue, and an incomplete one on a choose-your-own-adventure site. In the latter, the beast was attracted by the smell of her pleasuring herself on a frozen stalagmite. I'll try to find the links, but either way it would be awesome to read your version of a similar event at some point in the future- and I figured that there is a precedent for beasts in the shaak chapter, as well as a reference to being screwed by a wampa in one of the Jedi temple chapters. If not, I'm sure whatever else you come up with will be just as cool (pun intended). Also, everyone reading this has my sincere apologies for the length of this comment.
Here's the link to the one by shabby blue and chirpa:
A bit too much pain, and not enough pleasure perhaps, but still a decent story.
He also made a picture (note warning for obviously explicit sex)
Last edited by Rico; 07-19-2012 at 05:08 PM. Reason: Removing external links.
^I'm going to break this down into the four major parts in hopes I cover all your questions/comments
1) First of I am very humbled by your comment and appreciate the fact you would make an acount just because of me, I often wonder if what I write is at all any good or what people actually think! So thank you!
2)I am very familiar with Shabby blue's work and have had the privilege to have access to his personal website/speak with him (little known fact he was one of the reasons for starting this tale
3)Believe it or not I know the exact choose-your-own-adventure you're talking about because I was one of the authors that worked on it! though the project has stalled recently and hasn't had much work as of late I had planned on mentioning/linking to it when it was complete but who knows if that day will ever come.
4) So I guess the point is I will definitely write a wampa/Leia scene for you! I love getting input from my audience as I often feel like I don't know what you guys want to read, the shaak story was actually requested by Natsu if I remember correctly.
My only question for you (spycam) is, is their a varation of the wampa you specificly want or wish to see?
If i missed anything or if you have anymore questions/comments ask away, that goes for everyone
Last edited by UrbanChaos; 07-16-2012 at 09:44 PM.
Everyone who's ever heard of Shabby Blue is no doubt extremely jealous of you right now haha. I suppose I'll start with the most important part: the Leia/wampa scene itself. First, however, I'd like to request additional input from the other fans of this series- more ideas are always better, right? Let's make something epic here. Anyway, my suggestions for a personal ideal would probably include the whole icicle/stalagmite sextion (that was a typo, but I think I'll leave it ;)), perhaps even including a fingering segment as a prelude with Leia looking around for something bigger (I believe that was included in the cyoa, come to think of it), both because it's a great idea on it's own, and because the warmup makes the main event far more believable- and no doubt more pleasurable for our heroine. Speaking of warmups, I believe Shabby also made a tauntaun pic... sorry, I'll try to stay on topic. Obviously there will still be some discomfort (okay, a great deal of discomfort) at the beginning, and I'm all for 'physically impossible sex' (doesn't exist for Noobians, of course), but it should probably be kept short of blood, broken bones, etc. (not that I think you would write that, but I'm trying to cover as many bases as possible). I'm sure some people enjoy that stuff, but they're probably a minority. A small number of position changes seem appropriate as well. Some of the options in the cyoa, such as whether or not to provoke the wampa were intriguing, and I've been checking back irregularly to see if anyone has added to it. For the finale, I always wondered what would have happened if the rebel troops hadn't interrupted. So I guess, if any interruptions could be either removed or postponed, that would be great. Unless of course the interruption was in the form of another wampa... That may be going a bit too far, but hey, this is brainstorming- and besides, the whole situation is pretty ridiculous to begin with. The only other thing I can think of on the spot is something that I can't really make a suggestion on, because it will have to match what you've written up to that point, besides being your place to develop- Leia's reactions. Is she a repulsed or terrified victim? Is she secretly intrigued? Does she want it while being afraid of injury? Or is she thinking that somehow she has got to force this monster in? I'm sure there are other options as well, but based on your character development to date, I'd say that both extremes are unlikely at this point. Again, your call.
It's great to see an author who is willing to take fan input seriously. Thanks for reading, and once more I'd like to request more input and feedback from others, as mine was more or less pros and cons of other works.
Finally, you're quite welcome- you deserve all the praise people throw- and internet users throw precious little. I've always been a huge fan of star wars, and more recently of erotic fan works, and yours is some of the best I've found.
P.S. I promise my next comment will use bullet points or numbers heh heh...
mebbe a post not quite as long as well.
I'll do my best. Note form rather than sentence-paragraph form, perhaps.
and @spycam I personally like the paragraphs, but maybe a bulleted list at the bottom highlighting the major points? I like how you ramble on and sometimes slip off topic, but bullets at the end would help by having an easy to see list of what the main points are.
AS one of the last star wars sex writers I hope that you wont end episodes 5 and 6 that quickly you Know? this was intresting but their was still stuff we could have done where is the obi wan "instructing" Leia in the ways of the force?
um so Ideas that might be intresting
Luke fucking Mara obiviously
Leia being Raped and I mean RAPED by slave girls, jabba, and some sleazy bouty hunters and perhaps Solo wont be the reason to even use the jabba plot device a capture sex scene with any of the rebels
lets see Leia and her mother action and leia and anakin acion with/or without their mother along with the reveal of that?
Wampa action, SLeazy deals in besbin
an evil sith chick on Dagobath?
Obi wan instructing Leia with the force?
a scene with all the rebel slave this battle will bring?
Han meeting future Mother in law?
Winter raped on Hoth?
Shak ti and Alyua Secula coming back into the picture?
freeing some rebel slaves while their being trained forceing people to go under cover with the fun sexy training?
revealing the history of the old republic to the new generation in when lots of sex is going on?
(galactic empire the rebels diddnt know a whole hell of alot about what the republic was like but some of the old generation survived better here)
sorry about throwing so many ideas at you but I wanted to give you so ideas to take that you could mess with untill you came up with something you would want to do so have fun!
Oh yeah thank you for writeing this and
if the Gang here wants to consider if its right to even do the rebellion while they go to new and intresting place to fuck and be ficked that would be cool
and hey! you could use some gallen Mark/Starkiller stuff with juno Shak ti maris brood and more!
so yeah thanks and Id probably continue but the gang adventuring and falling into sexscapades while rebuilding the rebellion is probably the most logical choice
i figure i've waited long enough before asking when the next chapter is coming out. damn but im too busy to help edit though, urban
I'm leaving for a another work camp this thursday so I hope to have it up this wednesday
Well bad news, I worked as hard and fast on the next chapter as I could and couldn't finish it up to my standards... I worked pretty much as late as I could tonight but I have to catch a plane to go up north at 2am which is in an hour, I've come to the realization that i just simply cant finish it in that hour so I'm going to nap for an hour and be gone for the next week or so depending on how fast the site goes up... See you then i guess go ahead and post anything you'd like to see in future chapters, I enjoy looking em over and it helps me pump out the chapters faster
I hope to have the next chapter out this sunday, I've gotten a little lazy lately sorry about the wait
Star Wars: The What Ifs
Chapter 32: Frozen Wasteland
•This story in no way reflects George Lucas or the Star Wars Franchise the ideas in the story are fictional and in no way connected to said owners. No harm is intended. It is meant as a funny “what if”.
Chewie fished through his tool pouch looking for the right size wrench to break one of the many large bolts in the hyperdrive. His hand bumped the bag and the tools flooded out of the bag banging loudly against the hard metal floor. He roared in frustration and grabbed the bolt with his bare hands and started to twist! His huge biceps flexed but the bolt didn't budge, he roared in anger directing all his energy into his arms focusing on twisting. The bolt squeaked and started to give slowly, Chewie gave a final pull breaking the bolt from its rusted position than unscrewed it with his fingers and set it to the side.
He flexed his hand impressed with the fact he had been able to twist off the bolt with his hands and nothing else, though he was paying the price with sore arms now.
"Easy big guy don't hurt yourself." Cody said casually lying face up on a work bench trying to nap. Chewie barked that he was tougher than that forcing a smile from Chez.
"Well look at that you got a smile from old stone face himself." Cody said poking fun at Chez. Chewie gave a slight chuckle at the joke.
Cody's communicator beeped, making Chewie growl inquisitively.
"Echo three's not responding. Catch ya later C, we gotta sort this mess out." Cody groaned hopping off of the table and heading out of the room, Chez nodded to Chewie and followed his friend out ducking under the door way.
Chewbacca figured it was about time for a break anyway, he walked to the cockpit gently massaging his tense muscles, he flopped down into the copilots chair and looked out the window at the ice and snow. They had been on Hoth for a couple months now and he hated every second of it, though his long fur helped to protect him against the bitter cold he preferred a hot sun and vibrant plant life. All that was here was snow and ice, he understood why they were here of course, with the Empire hot on their tracks they had been forced to go from hiding spot to hiding spot trying to grow stronger in number until they could one day challenge the Empire again.
Chewie made his way back to the hyperdrive and plopped himself down on the floor and continued with his work, since he had gotten to Hoth all he did was work on the Millennium Falcon it seemed to make time go faster when his mind was focused working on a menial task. Anytime his mind wandered it often lead to thoughts about the Empire and the disgraceful position they had been forced into. He was a hunter a warrior! Not some weak prey that scurried around in the shadows, back home on Kashyyyk he had braved the forest floor countless times and fought horrible beasts yet here he was cowering in a cave. He knew he could tear a legion of stormtroopers apart with his two hands, regularly he could've counted on his best friend Han to back him up but lately his buddy seemed more interested in the, babes, as he put it, around the base rather than their friendship and the very real threat of the Empire.
Chewie's ears perked up hearing a noise somewhere in the ship, slowly and quietly he stood up and silently made his way to the door of the engine room. He peered out just in time to catch the sight of a shadow disappear down the hall, he sniffed deeply trying to recognize the scent but it wasn't one he was familiar with. He slowly crept down the hallway stalking the mysterious figure, he noticed a pair of pants carelessly discarded on the floor and picked them up. They were black and made from a tight elastic fabric meant to hug the ass, he had seen pants like these countless times in the local bars he had visited. He moved up a few more steps where a shirt made from similar material was laying, the trail seemed to be leading to Han's quarters but he wasn't here and wasn't supposed to be back for some time. Chewie cautiously entered the bedroom and saw a light on in the refresher.
"Just wait there, I hadn't expected you back this early!" A female voice yelled from the refresher. Chewie did as he was instructed and waited, though he honestly couldn't figure out who could've been expecting him.
"Tada!" A young female Chiss exclaimed bouncing out of the refresher boasting nothing but frilly pink lingerie
"Oh, you're not Han." She said noticing the wookie. Chewie growled an apology trying not to look at the extremely attractive young lady whom he now recognized as Taylyn, one of the many females that fawned over Han.
"No need to apologize, I was just hoping to win Han over with this stunt." She sighed sitting down on the edge of the bed.
"Come on over and sit with me you big lug." She added patting the covers beside her. Chewie sat down awkwardly beside her still trying to avoid as much eye contact as possible but stealing the occasional glance of her near nude blue body.
The pair sat in awkward silence while Chewbacca fidgeted with his hands not sure what to do.
"Do you think Han... likes me?" She said finally breaking the silence. Chewie responded quickly telling her that Han wasn't much of a touchy feely kind of guy and that he preferred to a good fuck rather than a relationship.
"I kind of figured as much." She replied with a hint of sadness in her tone. Chewie quickly back paddled assuring her that any man would be lucky to have her and how beautiful she was.
"Yeah I've heard that line before. You know I even borrowed this pair of underwear from Princess Leia." She chuckled at her own sadness, Chewie growled comfort to her a little taken back that Leia would have something so unpractical.
"What do you think? Is the pink flattering on me." She asked pushing her breasts together. Chewie ran his eyes over her inspecting her long smooth legs to her fantastic hips up to her large perky tits and finally to her luscious lips and only found her to be more sexy than he had previously thought.
"I take it from your large friend that's a yes." She teased seeing Chewie's hard dick.
Without warning she slipped herself between Chewie's legs on her knees, she put one hand on the large meaty shaft and slowly stroked, than added the second realizing her one hand wasn't going to be enough. Her small hands worked hard trying to please the large wookie, she had had a few wookie partners in her day but not even they had been this well hung. Her hands gripped tighter trying to fit the monster into her hands but she just couldn't do it. She worked her hands as hard as she could going from the tip down to the balls as fast as she could trying to please Chewie as best as she could. Chewie gave an appreciative moan watching the little blue Chiss struggle with his manhood, she tipped the cock down and began to lick the head of his huge dick slurping up any pre-cum trying to escape. She worked up the courage to stick the head into her mouth gently sucking it while her hands kept stroking the base of the cock.
Chewie bucked his hips slightly, slowly shoving his cock further down her throat. She did her best to swallow as much as she could, she coughed and spurted as she reached her maximum, she couldn't believe she was still a good five inches from deep throating the whole cock.
Chewie stood up and took Taylyn's head in his big hands, he held her steady while he began to buck his hips forcing his meat as far in as he could before pulling it out and slamming it back in. Spit flowed freely from Taylyn's mouth coating Chewie's pole making it slide easier. He pulled out his stiff cock and playfully smacked her cheeks with his rod making her giggle. Remembering how Leia hadn't let him fuck her snatch because his cock would've torn her pussy apart Chewie began to furiously jack his cock building up his need to cum so he could spray it all over her face.
"Aren't you going to fuck me before you blow your load?" Taylyn asked inquisitively.
Chewie quickly explained to her what had happened with Leia and had figured she would want the same.
"Leia sucked you off!?! Wow, I didn't think the princess ever got horny she's always seemed to up tight." She giggled slightly.
Chewie chuckled agreeing that it had surprised him too.
She laid down on her back and pushed her panties to the side so she could slowly finger her pussy.
"Go ahead big guy." She invited.
Chewie smiled and bent down, he grabbed her thighs and pulled her closer. The tip of his cock prodded the tight lips of her pussy and gradually pushed farther in making Taylyn wince in pain. He managed to fit half of his cock in and paused to ask if she was alright.
"I.. I'm fine, just never had anything this big in me." She stuttered slightly breathing heavily. Pain was showing very visibly on her face now. Chewie continued on pushing as gentle as possible, sweat beaded down her face as Chewie finally slid his massive dick all the way in. Chewie roared that he had managed to fit his meat completely in.
"See not so bad, though I do feel... full." She joked.
Chewie couldn't believe that this small Chiss had managed to fit his entire rod into her, he had never been with a humanoid female that had been able to accomplish such a feat, he swore he could even see a slight bulge , it had been a long time since had even had his whole cock sucked in. He honestly couldn't believe how tight her snatch really was, he began to move his cock slowly inside making sure not to slide out any in fear of not being able to get back in. Taylyn yelped a little feeling Chewie grinding inside her. But the more he moved the more she began to enjoy it and the more she wanted from him.
"Oh Chewie I need you to fuck me now!." She begged desperately, Chewie wanted to argue that they should take it slow but his instincts took over and before he knew it he was sliding his cock in and out. Making his way to a steady easy pace, she screamed in pleasure having never felt so much ecstasy in her life.
Chewie focused on keeping the speed of his thrusts at decent speed and rhythm, the tightness of her sweet pussy pulled him deeper in each time, the squeeze on his skin was almost unbearably pleasurable. It sucked and pulled in new ways with each thrust it was almost painful to pull it back. His balls begged for sweet release which he had managed to deny them so far, it was clear by Taylyn's screams and face that she was enjoying this just as much as he was his mind was foggy with the intense pleasure he was feeling but he could still hear begging for more.
Her hands massaged her breasts hard over the fabric of her bra pushing and pulling them every which way. Finally she pulled the bra underneath her tits exposing her lovely mounds her hands cupped her breasts as she let out a high pitched moan, She instantly found out why as her cum quickly coated his cock and slipped out of little space there was between his dick and her pussy.
Chewie took one look at her sexy body in mid orgasm and couldn't help but cum himself, his thick seed sprayed deep inside her womb he let out a long satisfying roar as he hot sticky cum continued covering inside her. He pulled his cock out with a loud pop and watched his cum flow out freely.
"That was amazing." She panted after several seconds.
"I'd better get out of her before Han gets back." She smiled picking herself up gingerly, she pulled her wet panties off and tossed them onto Han's pillow.
"That should let him know I was here, I'll just have to tell Leia I ruined them." She said before blowing Chewie a kiss and leaving.
Chewie rested for a minute then made his way to his room where he flopped down on his bed exhausted, maybe Hoth wasn't so bad he thought. His mind slowly faded off into the darkness but right before he fell asleep he swore he heard a Wampa roar, he would have to look into it tomorrow he noted...
-Episode 5 has begun and we have many adventures ahead of us, feel free to leave a comment or ask a question!-
Thanks for another awesome chapter! Definitely worth the wait. There don't seem to be enough Chewie stories around, and it was good to see the poor guy find someone compatible. I'm still reading that last line over and over though... Seems reminiscent of something... Could it be? Dare I hope? Hahaha, can't wait to see what you come up with next.
great new chapter.
great story so far. any wampa action coming up?
Great addition. Hopefully the next will be out soon
^ I'm not to sure when the next chapter will be out hopefully not as long of a wait as last time...
And yes the next chapter will be the wampa chapter
Dude, as far as I'm concerned you can take your time on this one haha. Hmm, assuming a wampa's cock is proportional to it's body, this is going to be very interesting (in a good way). Thoughts anyone?
I love your story and was hoping for an update on how the next chapter is coming.
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