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chive: Its a great story line but it read like you were in a hurry. And to many I then;s

wild77er: Great read keep up the great writings

Sonikuu: Such a headache to read. Can you please put in some paragraphs? thanks...

wild77er: What happen to 30 & 31 in this story and could you email those chapters to me??? shawnholman54@yahoo.com By the way am loving the story but don't want to jump a head

carjacker: Thanks! Hopefully there will be a little more response. They all start with a small amount of truth and then I expand on it. It's a lot of work and I would like there to be a little larger Audience. Your comments and votes are greatly appreciated.

Morgen: Thank you very much, I certainly apprciate your indulgence. I also look forward to your next chapter, I very much enjoy your interpretation of Jenna and Daddy, and the fact that your great idea got me going on a similar tack.

Oedipusrex73: I agree, I think our writing styles are unique enough for our readers to know the difference. Please, feel free to publish your chapters with my blessings. I know my publishing frequency is not what I wish it could be, but hopefully that is something I can work on this year. I do like the way your interpretation of the story is going too.

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Morgen: Thank you Oedipusrex73, for your endorsement. I wanted to make sure that you received the credit that you are due, for creating such a hot scenario. If anyone reading this has not read your versions, go and read them, NOW. With your kind permission, I would like to ask if I may publish my next chapter, it jumped into my head, almost fully formed, and I think there is room for 2 Storm Child series.

BigMann777: Where's the next one?

FuzzBuckit: Great job. I look forward to many more installments of this series.

FuzzBuckit: I love all of your stories, and this one is no exception. Your stories with young girls are my favourites and this one was incredibly hot. I cannot wait to read the second part of this. Purely amazing, carjacker. Please, don't stop.

Oedipusrex73: I must apologize to everyone who is eagerly awaiting a sequel to my stories. I promise you there will a chapter three to my original story line. In the meantime, I can understand how frustrating it can be to be left waiting and I am both pleased and honored that Morgen was inspired by my original story. Presently, I am in a country that I am not at liberty to say and since I only have a company computer and it is monitored at all times, I am only able to access the site with my smartphone. Which is really hard to write long stories on. I promise a chapter three as soon as I am able to write it. Thank you all. And Thank you Morgen, for taking up the torch when I was not able to. On a side note, I will be home very soon and will have a chapter three soon after.

olliethebum: verrry hot. maybe in the sequel she likes it a bit "too" much, maybe more than she likes sex with her husband ;)

DirtyDomWriter: yes oh yes so good

wild77er: Yes please More more MORE how about first group or ...

marsh92046: PLEASE MAKE PART 2 I CAN'T WAIT

marsh92046: I love it and want more please

marsh92046: I likw it and would like more

jailbaitlover: very sexy i could relate to this cause my sister and i used to have sex for a while

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9inch: Could someone email me these stories at peders1017@gmail.com? thanks

9inch: Could someone email me these stories at peders1017@gmail.com? thanks

9inch: Could someone email me these stories at peders1017@gmail.com? thanks

9inch: Could you email me your copies at peders1017@gmail.com? Thanks

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SilkyBitch: are you ever going to write another part to this one?

cedarboy1: Very descriptive ,very good ,a good read. Thank you.

wild77er: Yes please continue... SOON am loving what you wrote so far very much but I see you have other great stories incomplete also and hope you will complete them also before adding new... Even though new is good also

Morgen: Nice picture, a real sexy body!

wild77er: Great Story haven't checked yet but I hope you have more similar KEEP Writing great works AND thank you for the pleasure

wild77er: Hey, What happened to chapter 2 if they won't allow post please forward to me I just HATE Censuring and don't think it is right... Keep writing you are very good writer !!! shawnholman54@yahoo.com

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SilkyBitch: I already said what I thought in an email. But I thought I should let others see. You still do the best work with Amy Vanessa.

eeyoresadaddy: i love it please share more

arnyguy21: I would like to know if this is real cause if it is i think its hot

GigiATexasLady: Keep writing, super sexy story. Can't wait for the next chapter. What a way to learn about sex. David is one horny dude, and lucky at that.

dudley11: Very good indeed. I loved the part where you came in her pussy against her wishes. You need to write more on this.

GigiATexasLady: I loved this story. If you've never done roll play, you have missed something. I had a little boy (friend) who loved to please his mommy. This brought back such great memories. Thanks, would appreciate more.

nmsteve: More more more.friends have fucked my wife while i was tied up

bttm4u2: great fucking story I love to be a bitch for anything male too and have my cunt seeded full of cum by anything male while anyone watches love to be peed on by anyone too and have cum dripping out of me or off of me

bttm4u2: who wouldnt want to be fucked good by men, dogs, whatever male cock was available i know I would and suck them and have them pee in me too and be watched by anyone while being used by anything male for sex

bttm4u2: What a lovely fucking story I wish I were female and could get fucked for real like that

bttm4u2: don't you just love being fucked well by doggy cocks and left full of their cum I do

antluver: Like the story but you should have dump your load in the Asian pussy.

FuzzBuckit: Great job. Looking forward to the next installments!

Relyuhcs: I love how its all about the innocence of the situation, loved it.

Alfred9: She'll probably come around chapter 3 ≈ 4