 
					
							Blackroses
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		Back of the Bus 2: Coach
	
	
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				Yo please tell me you're gonna add more to this.  It's awesome.  I'm usually not a big fan of Gay sex, but when it's forced, it's so hotter.  Please add more.  PEACE
				
		
	
	
	
	
		The Unforgiven
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Very good story.   It had a very real intriguing plotline, and kind of scary too.  Good stuff.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		The Unforgiven
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Very good story.   It had a very real intriguing plotline, and kind of scary too.  Good stuff.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		We Caught Mom
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Really good story.  A few grammar problems, but nothing too serious, and really entertaining.  Hope to read more from you.  PEACE
				
		
	
	
	
	
		All I wanted to do was fuck the shit out of her...
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				I'm not usually one to give bad reviews, but this was just bad.  No one should really write a story or have fantasies like that.  I'm all for twisted and sordid things, but if you can't convey it stylishly, it's really just trash.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		My Angel
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				I almost cried from that.  It's so beautiful.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		For the lust of a Father
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Actually that was very good.  Believable, and loving.  Not just perverted like many of the other stories on here.  Good job, hope there's more.  PEACE
				
		
	
	
	
	
		A Question of Family
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Great details, and so well-written.  It actually made me wish I was her step-father.  That was hott.  I hope you've got more.  Check out some of mine too.   That was great stuff.  PEACE
				
		
	
	
	
	
		The Three Paths
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				That's a hard choice.  Personally, I'd choose the last option.  Only because I'm not sexually attracted to my sister or my mother.  So I'd pick the latter, but if it were your situation, I dunno.  I may have to go for the sister.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Warmth of a Sister
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Whew!  That was soooooooooo hot.  Anything that makes me blow my load while reading it, is damn well worth it.  Great stuff, hope you got more.  PEACE
				
		
	
	
	
	
		The Swamp
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				I really enjoyed this piece.  It had a lot of mystery in it, and it was rather thought-provoking.  Plus, it had brother/sister incest which I absolutely adore.   Awesome work, and I hope you do choose to write a sequel.  PEACE
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Love maker
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Why da fuck did you copy my poem?  You little shit.  That's not cool.  That's some fucked up shit right there.  I already posted that in Erotic Poetry.  You can check the date, and you fucked it up.  Fucking cunt.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Daddy in My Bed
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
											
												
										
				Honestly, that was really really good.  I loved your repitition in it.  When you wrote: "So hard, thick, thick, in me, in me".  Gave a brilliant exploration of a young girls mind as she is being taken by her father willingly and unwillingly at the same ti
				
		
	