cleanshaven
Member Since October 19, 2009
Cousin And I Discover Promised Land (Part Two)
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cleanshaven
4863 days ago
cleanshaven
5335 days ago
cleanshaven
4863 days ago
cleanshaven
5335 days ago
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Hard to find an author that can spell, use grammar and tell an erotic story at this level in a series: well done!
Crossing The Line To The Promised Land
by
cleanshaven
cleanshaven
You nailed it, dude! I like the way you let the story build and held my attention the entire time. Don't see this very often here, but when it happens I love it. Keep writing and keep up the quality of your work.
My little sis(part one)
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lovenator.kevin
lovenator.kevin
Quit writing now...you have already peaked. Aim low and you will hit every time. Try learning to use spell check, perhaps even learn how to spell or use grammar. No idea what you were doing instead of attending classes in school but hope they taught you t
Vacatition with my daughter
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rekrap
rekrap
You had the start of a good story but I found it very difficult to read without punctuation and capital letters. Might try spell check, too.