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The cruise by

usmc93 5384 days ago

theBlackDouglas 5856 days ago

- 4 + Very good start now keep going...

Two young girls - two older men. by

davidj 5384 days ago

theBlackDouglas 5856 days ago

- 4 + A very good start but watch your punctuation and please use paragraphs

Daddy's Birthday by

ClintonB 5384 days ago

theBlackDouglas 5856 days ago

- 5 + Really good little story - loved the twist at the end.

Shona and friends - Epilogue by

theBlackDouglas 5384 days ago

theBlackDouglas 5856 days ago

- 5 + Well I had to give to 5 stars...

But I'd like to thank folks for their feedback and kind comments. "Ali and friends" has already been posted but under the title "Student Days" - please check it out.

I've also posted a few other stories - don't know

Inside Me: C01 by

enchrine 5401 days ago

theBlackDouglas 5856 days ago

- 4 + From one author to another, well done. Cracking story.

Brothers revenge on Sister by

gimmeshelter 5788 days ago

theBlackDouglas 5856 days ago

- 4 + Good story, a sequel would be appreciated

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