CaptHorton
Member Since October 19, 2009
Only mom and I Know ch.1
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thestoryspinner
5384 days ago
CaptHorton
5856 days ago
thestoryspinner
5384 days ago
CaptHorton
5856 days ago
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That wasent half bad keep it up. I would work on size and spacing more but pretty good. - Tim
Two sisters 15 & 17 and half Brother with family Great Dane caught
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shutterbug51
shutterbug51
This story wasent that great. People dont talk the way you have the children talking either. Keeep trying try to make it more real like. Gets more intresting.