Zeoman1001
Member Since October 19, 2009
A young boy, and an older man...
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steve666
5387 days ago
Zeoman1001
5859 days ago
steve666
5387 days ago
Zeoman1001
5859 days ago
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Where's the sequel? I want the sequel!
My Mother( MY $100 WHORE) PT. 3
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gharper
gharper
umm....this is waaay too short, lacks plot, detail, heck, it doesn't even sound realistic! take this one back to the drawing board and expand it by at least 3 more pages. learn how to write a short story properly. please.
My Mother( MY $100 WHORE) PT. 3
by
gharper
gharper
dude. putitin has it right- this is long but it's a sucky story. learn to write well before write erotica.