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Fore69 Member Since September 01, 2011
Horse Rape
Fore69 4644 days ago
- 0 + A great story although more detail always helps especially feelings. Insatiable Sadie has a good point and its a good habit to get into although I get the feeling you were really turned on when you wrote it so not a biggie-Wink
Such Beautiful Horses Pt. 3
Fore69 4644 days ago
- 0 + "and then he was in me" very weak-a more detailed description would have been appreciated together with feelings and emotions.
Taken - Chapter 2 - My First Second Time
Fore69 4644 days ago
- 0 + Mmm this next time will be more enjoyable for you-wink