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Me and my Brother by WTFISUP2424 4881 days ago
schmee 5353 days ago
- 1 + Number one: Use a spell checker

Number two: think out your storie BEFORE You

start Writing it
A Curious Little Sister (Part 2) by Diabolos 4881 days ago
schmee 5353 days ago
- -1 + would have been good had you rememberd to space out your paragraphs.....
My Turn (Pt. 1) by storieteller 4881 days ago
schmee 5353 days ago
- 6 + It has patental
A Family In Love by lmsyd4u 4881 days ago
schmee 5353 days ago
- 10 + i cant Beleave i even read this, No kind of storie what so ever

No Paragraphs no Qotations, no plot no nothing but a bunch of words......please never Write a storie agein in your life
How I Compelled My Own Madam,My Boss,To Have Sex With Me! by Orgasm_teacher 4881 days ago
schmee 5353 days ago
- 1 + dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!

dont ever write agein!
Continuing saga with my niece Sara by kev922 4959 days ago
schmee 5353 days ago
- 10 + I like it, one of the better stories out there
Skating Rink by hornylisa 5235 days ago
schmee 5353 days ago
- 6 + Paragraphs, font size and a better plot

Try reading stories

that get good reveiws and see how they write.

you have Patential but need to find it
Dominatrix Sister part 4 by uosdwisrdewoh 5345 days ago
schmee 5353 days ago
- 1 + But dont write another storie like the 4th one agein.....