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thenatone Member Since October 19, 2009
Lara settles in at school by Kent_xxx 5041 days ago
thenatone 5303 days ago
- 8 + I like how you went into detail, waiting to get the much needed introduction of Lara and her personality before heading into the action. Nice way to cap the story, definetly need part 2 and maybe a little longer with more partners and situations Lara find