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Boner534 Member Since May 20, 2012
My Brother and I Share a Girl (Part 1)
Boner534 3930 days ago
- 0 + Well, I must say that was one of the best stories I've read In a long time. Nearly peed from cumming so hard. Lemme tell you, I had a horrible day at work, car broke down, boss yelled at me, etc.

Reading stories like this makes me lusting for more. Jamie, the sheer talent you share here makes some of our lives better. 5 cool swords to Jamie!

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Your assassin-like friend,

Boner534.
Saving her from herself - Chapter 7
Boner534 3961 days ago
- 0 + Well...I'll be damned! You continued the series! I was so dissapointed when you stopped, because of that spammer! Please continue! Two Cool swords!

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Your assassin-like friend,

Boner534
Twin Brother and Sister let Little Brother In
Boner534 3984 days ago
- 0 + I'll be damned... that's one of the best stories I've read in a while. It'd be a shame if you stopped there. You may have a few spelling errors, but you make up for it with the little teaser you left on the front page.

Now I'm not saying don't write the next masterpiece, Or you winning the Nobel Prize, but hell, you got potential, and a mind out of this world. Hope to hear more from you. I've had a bad vacation, but you made made my day. Two golden cool swords to you, mate.

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Your assassin-like friend and supporter,

Boner534

PS: If you can't edit ypur story, find someone who can. JeffreyFreemont does it all the time.
Christmas Morning
Boner534 4024 days ago
- 0 + TexasRose, I'm pleasantly surprised by this story! I can't believe all the characters fucked on Christmas Day! What I would do to get that kind of a family... I'd do a lot of things!

I could fuck my hot sexy cousin, Kristie if I had a family like that! Best Christmas ever! :D. This is a good story! No, it's not good. Its AMAZING! Hope to hear more from you! Cool sword below.

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Your Assassin-like friend,

Boner534
Babysitter's discovery part 3
Boner534 4024 days ago
- 0 + This was a extremely good series! Im so damn well impressed, If I could give you a Nobel Prize, for creating the greatest sex stories, I would, in a new york minute.

Morgen, your stories are easy to read, spell checked, and packed with pleasure and fun!

I could make a nobel prize out of symbols, but that would take to long. Plus, Im drifting off to sleep as I write this, and the storm over us could make the power go out any second! *Lightning crackles* That's my cue to wrap this up!

Love your stories, hope to hear more from you!

Your assassin-like friend and fan,

Boner 534
Sarah and Daddy part 9
Boner534 4033 days ago
- 0 + Hoping for a foursome with the mom! Cool sword below!

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Rob and Tracy part 5
Boner534 4033 days ago
- 0 + Loved it! Hope to hear more from you, Morgen! I support you always, because I love your stories! 2 Cool swords below!

Your assassin-like friend, and big fan, supporter,

Boner534
Rob and Tracy part 5
Boner534 4033 days ago
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Tortured
Boner534 4053 days ago
- 0 + To start, I didn't know you could write a story in pink! This shows us how feminine and from Kitten's point of view! Perhaps you could write a story from SS point of view, in blue, just a thought.

I love the way this plot is turning! Here's your cool sword!

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Your assassin-like friend,

Boner 534.
The New Guest Pt 3: Home-Cumming
Boner534 4060 days ago
- 0 + I like it! Hope to hear more from you, and the series itself. Cool sword below.

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Boner534.
The New Guest Pt 3: Home-Cumming
Boner534 4059 days ago
- 0 + Good, happy for you!

Your assassin-like friend and supporter,

Boner534
The Tropical Island 2
Boner534 4060 days ago
- 0 + I like it, but i'd prefer some incest with a little animal twist. Say, Robert or Will fuck Mia's ass, while a chimpanzee fucks her pussy. It's actually been proven that some chimpanzee's can use sign language. I find this interesting, because if the characters properly sexually educate the monkey, then Mia, Rob, or Will might have some fun. Also, because of the fact that if the chimp signs, then it can give feedback or comments to up the sexual bliss and pleasure.

You could say it's similar to Your Family of Sex series, when Jay's dog was taught to lick his balls or ass. I am hoping for something similar to this.

Good story, full of suspense and sex, was worth the wait. 2 cool swords to sexyboy22, for a good story.
The Tropical Island 2
Boner534 4060 days ago
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Boner534

(I know it's screwed up, but I was tired and forgot)
Rob and Tracy part 4
Boner534 4024 days ago
- 0 + One does not simply masturbate at the age of 4. That's common sense! Also Monica, (the child) was in her crib! Plus, you posted this comment on the wrong series, man! How old are you? 10? Would make sense how your mind only computes to porn, videogames and solving basic needs. Either that, or you wrote this while being slighty intoxicated.
HIS FIRTS
Boner534 4059 days ago
- 1 + Seriously, I will fucking buy you a Mr. Spell Check from the 90's if that's what it takes to get you to spell correctly.

Hell, if I have to use the old spell check paper clip from word, and implant him in your brain, I will.

Paragraphs were created for a reason. Use them, and indent as well. It may seem like we strive for perfection, but honestly, we are humans giving advice.
A former student
Boner534 4060 days ago
- 0 + No cool swords, so unworthy of even half a sword. Wrong section, and revenge of the giant wall o' text. A terrible combo when put together. First story I've actually rage quitted, because of the giant wall o' text, I lose my place easily.

This needs to be rewritten, and rescripted. Voted for it because my new girlfriend's name is Mariah.
Her Mother's Lover Part 3
Boner534 4055 days ago
- 0 + Everyone, every author, reader, voter, commenter, etc. You have to understand, the pain and agony, one of my sisters, Cynthia, went through, on LSD. She died, because of too many orgasms. 49 orgasms, fucking always wonder, why did she do it?

Her damn hippie friends are in jail for LSD use, and second degree murder, of my dear sister. She was drugged at a party, someone (we found out who, but I'd rather not say), Drugged her wine with a white LSD tablet. She then became extremely horny, and had 49 orgasms, and died from them. She was bi, so a few girls made her cum as well as men. Please, do not use drugs. Even smoking, for my sake, and Cynthia's.

She was the reason I had incestuous fantasies in the first place. I had a affair with her long, long ago. She is also the reason why I have a thing for blonde albino women.

Please, please, everyone: No more stories about being drugged, for Cynthia's sake. Mind control Is one thing, but no more druggy stories. The stress, grief, and depression I went though, even now, is hard.

Varun, heres your sword, but no more druggy stories please. D'X

Your sad and assassin-like friend and supporter, Boner534.

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PS: No this is not for sympathy, but today is her birthday. A year from today she died. She died drugged, but happy, because of the LSD.
Auntie Babs farm
Boner534 4076 days ago
- 1 + Well, To be honest, I'm speechless. That, was some pretty good incest! My goodness, Morgen, you've done it again! You made me hard and curious as to where this incest shall lead.

Ladies and gentleman, For the first time in history, I present to Morgen, for writing the best incest I've ever read, in my life.

FIVE GOLDEN DIAMOND STUDDED COOL SWORDS!!!

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Your assassin-like friendly friend, #1 fan and supporter,

Boner534

PS: Five golden diamond studded swords, is equal to five Oscar's.
Mistery gift
Boner534 4087 days ago
- 0 + Very nice, hoping for more in this series. You seem like you have potential in being an author.

Normally, I dont read animal stories, but this is an exception. Varunpal's and yours are the only animal stories I have believed that I have read. Still a good mother- son incest twist ending. I dont mind if you are from a not english speaking country, for I am not racist, I respect all races equally.

Good story, hope to hear more from you. Spelling errors are common in your story, but that is alright with me. A bit of adivce: You can get someone to edit your story if you have the time. Jeffrey Freemont has in the past for his Logan Series.

Here is your cool sword!

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Your assassin-like friend, Boner534
Health Club surprise part 2
Boner534 4079 days ago
- 0 + Good story morgen! As you being the first author I have read here, varunpal the second, I hope you understand you have my full support.

Left me hard, and eagerly waiting for more. Good series overall.

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Your assassin-like friend, and # 1 fan,

Boner 534 (maybe not number 1 :p)
haveing fun
Boner534 4118 days ago
- 0 + This is your first story, so I won't go willy nilly with suggestions, But my point is no1specialhere is right. Reading through a story and findind errors can be a bit annoying.

You can maybe find someone to edit your story, if they are up for it. Here's a cool sword for trying. ===¦========>

Your Assassin-like friend,

Boner534.

PS: Just giving a few tips as a friendly gesture.
my slutty girlfriend
Boner534 4098 days ago
- 0 + To be honest, So many spelling errors that I couldn't read this. I don't know how exactly you wrote this in ISS, usually keeping phones and computers AWAY. I can see you writing this, while the teacher wasn't looking. My point is, It may not be the infamous giant wall o' text, but spell check should be used.-_-
moms pussy.
Boner534 4095 days ago
- 1 + I also agree with minion. It's as if your trying to tell a story, and it comes out jambled up.

Few tips for beginning writers:

1) Most of the writer's here are descriptive, and give detailed stories. Try to prolong your story, but don't use words like, um, uh, etc. Makes you actually look like the narrator lost his train of thought :P

2) Most authors here, (or some, not all) either are dyslexic, or lose their place easily while reading. Try not to make it a giant wall o' text. Also, make sure you use spell check, and not all caps your story.

Here is a cool sword for actually trying to make somewhat of an attempt at writing a story.

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Your assassin-like friend,

Boner534
My sexy new neighbor
Boner534 4118 days ago
- 0 + From what kcid25 said, I agree. I would like to know more about summer camp. Any affairs with camp counselors, Sex with any other student, etc.

Morgan's stories always seem to please me, if true or a fantasy, from lesbian, to bisexual, incest, or Mind Control. Shes the reason I made an account here, so I of course give praise where it is needed.

Your Assassin-like friend and fan,

Boner534

PS: I haven't had much free time for more stories, So I apologize for the inconvenience. Secondly, my birthday will be feburary 16.
The Renters - part 1
Boner534 4098 days ago
- 0 + Alright, seems legitiment story material. Hope to see more from you. Cool sword is below.

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Your assassin-like friend,

Boner534

Also, I usually end my comments with: Your assassin like friend, and then post my username at the bottom. Because I'm like spiderman, except I am a assassin, apart of the Brotherhood. Only with weapons, spy gear, a grappling hook, and a creed: Nothing is true, everthing is permitted.

Just encase anyone was wondering. :P
The Renters - part 1
Boner534 4098 days ago
- 0 + The assassin now waits for his next girl to lay. C:
Rob and Tracy part 1
Boner534 4191 days ago
- 0 + Morgen, you never dissapoint me. That seriously was really good and I will look out for anymore installments of this series.

Your cool sword has arrived. It reads: Stay awesome, Morgen. I know you will :)

Your assassin-like friend,

Boner534
True Love will win in the end...
Boner534 4192 days ago
- 0 + Destiny can be changed in many different ways. As varunpal said, im with him on the love stories.

Your cool sword has arrived. The sword is inscripted: Stay awesome

Your assassin-like friend,

Boner534.
Barnyard Orgy Part 5
Boner534 4192 days ago
- 1 + Dear varunpal, i know ive been off for a long while but im back.

I absolutely loved your barnyard orgy series. I know you are best with incest but its always good to try something new. Here is your cool sword! ===¦=======>

Your assassin-like friend

Boner534
Initiation night
Boner534 4192 days ago
- 0 + I would like to say thank you to Morgen. Her stories truly inspired me (may not be decent stories i make, but hey, you live and you learn) Thanks Morgen!!!

Your cool sword has arrived. The sword is inscripted: Stay awesome.

Your assassin like friend,

Boner534