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Luckymann Member Since October 19, 2009
HOME EDUCATION
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 0 + Sorry, this one didn't work. I suggest you try writing on a topic you may know something about, such as wanking off.
Meeting jessica
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 2 + Sorry Randy, but I'd like to see your driver's license. I found your story to sound like it was written by a horny 14-year-old. I am 59, and I've never heard of a parent, especially a father leaving his virgin daughter alone with her boyfriend as mu
Meeting jessica
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 0 + If you'd like to leave me a message, try going to the forums (SSP Forums) and search for Luckymann. That should bring up my profile. Of course you have to be a member of SSp Forums first, but it's free. Looking to hear from you soon.
The Delight of Amber
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 0 + I'm glad you guys like my story. Thanks for the nice comments. I am trying to figure out how to post it on the SSP forums now. Thanks again.
Health Class and some help from dad
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 1 + It was a little short and weak on details, but I hope you post more of your story soon.
First Time on Prom Night
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 4 + Your story started nice enough, but quickly deteriorated. You must be a virgin. Come on! A virgin girl just drops her clothes and wants to get busy? Yeah right! I know this stories are supposed to be fiction, but this thing didn't even make good
My first time
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 6 + ...was a nice story, but it was difficult to read. If you have gone to college, please pay attention in English comp. Pay special attention to sentence spacing and paragraphs.

With a few improvements in grammar and structure, you can write a very
PYASI TEACHER
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 0 + I am sorry for the text error. Apparently, my document didn't transfer with its proper format.
My Girls Chapter 10
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + I hope this series continues. It's rare to read a porn with such a good storyline. Keep 'em cuming.
Cassie
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + I loved your story. I hope you write another chapter soon.
Pussy Attack
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 2 + All BS. No lead in, the gal just goes home with a complete stranger, fucks at the drop of a hat, and fucks nine hours a day. Yeah right!
After School Special
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 2 + I echo the previous comments. I had to stop reading after what should have been a couple of paragraphs. Next time, try paying attention in English class. I'm no expert on grammar, but good lord, you suck.
My little sis(part one)
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 0 + Before writing Part 2, please pay a little more attention in middle-school English class. Pay particular attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation.

This story appears to have been written by a day-dreaming 12-year-old. It was all BS!
First time with Chelsea Koh
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 8 + You have written an tender story, but it was difficult to read. The language differences made it difficult to follow, but I still enjoy your story.
Couldn't Resist her
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + I think you wrote a great story. I especially liked the way you frequently tried to justify the attack of a young virgin. A bit of blackmail to bring hre to you would be good now.
The Vicar's Wife (Part One)
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 8 + I too enjoyed this story inspite of the need to suspend belief in reality. I'm hoping The Vicar's Wife demands the Vicar make some serious improvements soon before she brings in some reinforcements.
My Mother( MY $100 WHORE) PT. 3
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 4 + You've got a good start here. I look forward to more of this series. Afterall, this gal has two more holes to ream, and she's showing excellent sighs of being a good sex slave. I don't understand why some morons bitch about your stories. If we wer
Hand in the Darkness
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 8 + but where's the rest?
Waking the dog
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + I'm looking forward to Pt. 2.
Knocking Up Sis 2
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 2 + I liked it. I'll be looking for Lauren's turn to be knocked up. For a little wilder revenge, consider renting Lauren and Kayla to your friends after they're both knocked up. Turn them into cum sluts.
Emmy's Foot Massage
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + Great story. I hope you writer the next episode real soon. And the pic is delicious. Are there more like it?
My Sister in Law and her first experience!
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + Great little story. I hope you intend writing a 2nd part. That poor virgin girl needs a good fucking.
Cheerleaders abduction Part 4
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + I see it's been a while since you've added anything to this series. Too bad! I've greatly enjoyed your cheerleader story. PLease add some more soon.
Warlocks capture
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 0 + This story seems to have been written by a middle school dropout.
My Girls Chapter 8
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 0 + I only wish Amy had gotten in on the act. Her breaking in and training would be a great read if you put as much effort into that story-line as you did this one. Thanks!
My Girls Chapter 8
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + You deserve the 5 stars
My Girls Chapter 15
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + Your story continues to keep me coming back for more. I anxiously await the next installment(s). Keep up the great work.
My Girls Chapter 13
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + I seldom read multi-part stories. Yours, however, have been an exception. Once I read the first chapter I was hooked. You do such a good job weaving your story line and a little sex.

I would like to see a little more sex, but who am I. I
My Girls Chapter 4
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + Please keep this story coming. I continue to look forward to your future chapters.
My Girls Chap 2
Luckymann 5320 days ago
- 10 + have turned me on. I'm looking forward to Chap. 3.