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moms pussy.

sglide99 on Incest Stories

I walked into my parents beed room one day when I was about 13. My mom was laying on the bed bare ass naked spread wide open. My Dad had taken advantage of the fact that she took strong drugs for migraines that completely knocked her out for hours. He had laid the pipe to her and left her like that when he went to the bar.There she laid all wide open with a big load of his cum puddled in her lips. 
I had never seen a real pussy before that so I stared at it as long as I thought was safe before she woke up. Then I got the hell out of there,boy what a shock to see that. I never when in her room after that unless I knew she was up and dressed.

3 Comments

Boner534

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I also agree with minion. It's as if your trying to tell a story, and it comes out jambled up.

Few tips for beginning writers:

1) Most of the writer's here are descriptive, and give detailed stories. Try to prolong your story, but don't use words like, um, uh, etc. Makes you actually look like the narrator lost his train of thought :P

2) Most authors here, (or some, not all) either are dyslexic, or lose their place easily while reading. Try not to make it a giant wall o' text. Also, make sure you use spell check, and not all caps your story.

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Boner534

LuckyCharm

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I agree with Minion, great concept that was just realized too quickly. I would have loved to see more details. Going at mom, going at friend, dad going at boy, boy sharing mom, lotsa of storylines in there. Expand on each one individually and you may have a little series on your hands.

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